Most Welcome Cool Breeze

Gentle is the touch of breeze that makes its way 
Through during the evening in these hot days.
I sit in a web chair under the big oak's gaze, 
Listening to the mockingbirds sing; giving praise.

Leaves streamlet soft light, dappled plays 
on my lap, and dormant grass; rain we pray.
 
Like a butterfly in a maze of scent, my mind strays
To the day occurrence and  memories, it displays.

7/5/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Fowler Avatar
July 9, 2022 at 7:10 AM
A cool breeze in the evening is a nice respite from the southern heat! And the mockingbirds are so tuneful. Nice write Eve! Linda
Eslinger Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 9:35 PM
Sweet, restful, great imagery and reached all five senses while staying to a single sounding rhyme. I nearly reached for my ice tea and hand fan. I loved it. Nice weekend!
Tor Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 8:47 PM
I'm sure that cool Breeze is a God Send on those warm days. Sounds like a lovely place to be Eve...
Kannan Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Such a beautiful imagery... very soothing... Loved this wonderful monorhyme...
Buhagiar Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 12:25 AM
This is an excellent poem. I love the monorhyme. Perfect in constriction.
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