Mosquitoes

In the summertime we all fear,
that certain bug that we can't hear.
Like a vampire with wings it comes in the night,
sometimes it feels like they take a pint.
You scratch the itch until it's raw,
there should be some kind of law!
To eradicate this bug before I die,
Ouch! I think one just bit my eye!
Those rotten mosquitoes are on a roll,
maybe I should move to the North Pole.


JSergi


Contest : Relate to on of these Quotes

#7 Why didn't Noah swat those two mosquitoes?  Anonymous
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Mehta Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 4:39 AM
Enjoyed the write on the selected quote and congrats on the fine win, Joseph
Sergi Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 5:45 AM
Glad you enjoyed the write and thanks for the congrats Dr. Ram.
Jones Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 7:30 PM
Congratulations.. so glad to see you win....:-)
Sergi Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 8:17 PM
Thanks so much Donna for the Congrat's!
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December 19, 2013 at 11:49 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem Joseph in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sergi Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 3:22 PM
Thank you Anne Lise for you post
Barton Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 11:08 AM
very humorous... I grew up around mosquitoes. growing up on an island makes you accustomed to them, never fond of them but the come with the territory .. good write friend
Kendrick Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 10:06 AM
Congratsssssss!!! Way to go..Sara
Sergi Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 3:23 PM
Sara thanks so much for the Congrats!
Perry Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 5:55 PM
hahah!! Love it! Love the line......." Like a vampire with wings it comes in the night"....Those lil terrors :)
Sergi Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 7:30 PM
HI Jennife, thanks for the post on this poem. Yea I hate those little blood suckers!!
Jones Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 11:31 AM
Man I AGREE! What in the world are they good for? Love your poem.....
Sergi Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 7:56 PM
They really make a dent in the summer, Thank you Donna for your comment
Breidenthal Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 9:31 PM
Adorable! : ) --not the mosquitoes of course, but your cute, humorous verse. ; ) Always, Laura
Sergi Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 7:56 PM
Thanks Laura! I am glad you enjoyed the poem
Kendrick Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 5:34 PM
Cute one in this work..I got a chuckle..I don't like those mosquitoes for they do love to bite me..My husband rarely gets a bite..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments were encouraging..Sara
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December 3, 2013 at 8:17 PM
Glad you enjoyed this one Sara
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