Mosquitoes

In the summertime we all fear,
that certain bug that we can't hear.
Like a vampire with wings it comes in the night,
sometimes it feels like they take a pint.
You scratch the itch until it's raw,
there should be some kind of law!
To eradicate this bug before I die,
Ouch! I think one just bit my eye!
Those rotten mosquitoes are on a roll,
maybe I should move to the North Pole.


JSergi


Contest : Relate to on of these Quotes

#7 Why didn't Noah swat those two mosquitoes?  Anonymous

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Date: 12/20/2013 4:39:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on the selected quote and congrats on the fine win, Joseph
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/20/2013 5:45:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the write and thanks for the congrats Dr. Ram.
Date: 12/19/2013 7:30:00 PM
Congratulations.. so glad to see you win....:-)
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/19/2013 8:17:00 PM
Thanks so much Donna for the Congrat's!
Date: 12/19/2013 11:49:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem Joseph in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/19/2013 3:22:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise for you post
Date: 12/19/2013 11:08:00 AM
very humorous... I grew up around mosquitoes. growing up on an island makes you accustomed to them, never fond of them but the come with the territory .. good write friend
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Date: 12/19/2013 10:06:00 AM
Congratsssssss!!! Way to go..Sara
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/19/2013 3:23:00 PM
Sara thanks so much for the Congrats!
Date: 12/17/2013 5:55:00 PM
hahah!! Love it! Love the line......." Like a vampire with wings it comes in the night"....Those lil terrors :)
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/17/2013 7:30:00 PM
HI Jennife, thanks for the post on this poem. Yea I hate those little blood suckers!!
Date: 12/6/2013 11:31:00 AM
Man I AGREE! What in the world are they good for? Love your poem.....
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/6/2013 7:56:00 PM
They really make a dent in the summer, Thank you Donna for your comment
Date: 12/3/2013 9:31:00 PM
Adorable! : ) --not the mosquitoes of course, but your cute, humorous verse. ; ) Always, Laura
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/6/2013 7:56:00 PM
Thanks Laura! I am glad you enjoyed the poem
Date: 12/2/2013 5:34:00 PM
Cute one in this work..I got a chuckle..I don't like those mosquitoes for they do love to bite me..My husband rarely gets a bite..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments were encouraging..Sara
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/3/2013 8:17:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed this one Sara
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