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Mosaic Memory

Frightend children under the baobab Of elders discourse playing At the deep edge of rites Of passages With no Atlantic dream. There is a beauty here Before the other world began Forgetting its origin And taste Of white milk in black breast Beautifully caressing The tongue Outside the jaws of greed. The time of pyramids Lolling On the golden sands Full with the jewels of history Civilizations gone And dead sphinx to come To Alexandria dreaming Far from the distant Wonders of Timbuctu. And after all that gain Suddenly a flood Of nothingness Carrying totems Of laughed animism On children's head Like weed. Stale rum sizzling In the heat Of deception Crackle lies The missionary and prelates of doom Smile when the boom Behind us burst Crankling chains Move to the shackle of the feet The heart coffled To the suddeness of defeat Stared at the deception That could not win Without the foul Practices bred in smoke filled bars Of cold desolate places making a wave. We come From banks of river Surety to insurance companies For new ships That carry us promisary notes Of golds to cotton and cane Replacing the earth hidden Treasures In a mother's bowels We come Dying To change the mosaic to come Into a place Where you know may know I am The father of the race.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/25/2009 2:18:00 PM
And I my friend, am amazed at the depth of talent it takes to write such a powerful poem as this. A journey of pain and hardship, memory and knowledge flowing from your core, so well penned. You are an amazing poet. I wish I could write like this. So excellent. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/25/2009 1:17:00 PM
Ahh, a bit of history it does seem; within a profoundly felt nutshell of couse; unto to the true horrors, suffering and plights, of of great nations children, stolen from their properous, enriched and wonderful land! Led into a place of suffering, death, opression and sorrow, etc.! Longing for their of home of lost heritage; while encnslaved by greed, heartlessness and ignorance, of a not so long ago of time! Excellent write of heart my friend! Love to You and Yours, John!:)
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Date: 3/22/2009 2:11:00 PM
There are not enough adjectives for this outstanding write, David!! It is just incredible. In the last stanza, line six do you want to say "of gods to cotton and cane" ?? or leave it "golds" ???? I guess the promisary notes carries the golds but they surely worshiped cotton and cane as if it were god and then played god in determining who was human. Love the last line .... AMEN!! Hope to see this entered in a contest!!
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Date: 3/22/2009 1:38:00 AM
Liked the inner poem of the second stanza David.Rgds Brian & thanks for your very welcome comments on my endeavours
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Date: 3/21/2009 6:05:00 AM
your touch is so amazing... the descriptions really build a picture ... ~ Arany
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Date: 3/20/2009 1:37:00 PM
This is a very good piece of poetry.. I thoroughly enjoyed your language in the piece....the fifth stanza starting with stale rum is awesome..this is just well a written piece of art...thanks for the comments.
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Date: 3/20/2009 1:26:00 PM
real nice, i had to read this two times. this will spark up a good conversation. i really like the end.
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Date: 3/20/2009 1:11:00 PM
hi david thank you for your kind words God bless you
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Date: 3/20/2009 11:21:00 AM
A very creative description of African history, David. Thank you for letting us see the continent through your poet's eyes!
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