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Mortal Destiny

We are mere mortals with an uncertain destiny at the mercy of time and of fates that be but dearest, I will remain forever true to thee For it's you I will love, I avow this faithfully I will hold you close unto my soft breast press my warm lips to yours upon behest croon thee to slumber when in need of rest bathe you in the ocean's waves as they crest Though death may blazon to me in the night shackled, we shall remain in chains held tight never will I be enticed away from your sight nor will a grave ever become our dividing blight No reaper's scythe shall keep you from me from this heart of mine, you will never be free as rooted fast in the Earth's richest soil, a tree our hearts will be entwined for all eternity

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Date: 8/15/2022 12:16:00 PM
Wow, Lin, this poem is filled with passion and love unleashed. I'm enthralled by every line you've penned. Simply Superb:)
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/1/2022 4:08:00 AM
Thank you for such wonderful expressions of support, Terrell.
Date: 12/29/2021 5:50:00 AM
And from the deepest well of love, she writes !! Such feeling does exist and your poem Lin, perfectly expresses it!! Excellent! Happy New Year!!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/29/2021 5:59:00 AM
Yes, they do, Mike. If only they'd last. Thanks so much for your sweet thoughts. Happy and healthy New Year to you.
Date: 12/28/2021 11:42:00 PM
Lin, Your poem arouses the mortal in me. You have a way.., perhaps should say, you know the way. The way to find that crease that exists in all hearts. -Richard
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/29/2021 3:23:00 AM
Richard, your comments are always endearing. Sometimes the creases created by love are unfolded, leaving a rift, a scar, a pain. Thank you for your insight.
Date: 12/28/2021 2:38:00 PM
Lovely presentation of love as it is meant to be, Lin. Any two that have become one in the Love of this poem were meant to be. Call it fate or destiny. Happy New Year my friend! Bill
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/29/2021 3:21:00 AM
Thank you, Bill. I hope the new year is good to you.
Date: 12/27/2021 12:11:00 PM
A verse of deep commitment to the one you love Lin. Nothing in this life or the next shall break it. Hope the coming year brings you good Health and happiness. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/28/2021 8:34:00 AM
Well, things happen, Tom That love was broken quite a few years ago. Thanks for reading.
Date: 12/27/2021 12:04:00 PM
This is a beautiful monorhyme, Lin, nicely done. I hope you share it with the one you love.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/28/2021 8:34:00 AM
Not romantically involved with anyone, Milt. Thanks for reading.
Date: 12/27/2021 8:21:00 AM
Very beautiful Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/28/2021 8:32:00 AM
Thank you, Mark,
Date: 12/27/2021 6:53:00 AM
Such deep emotions of longing to be together, though you sound a bit clingy today, ;) Nicely written, Lin, I enjoyed the read. Hugs, John
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/29/2021 3:21:00 AM
no worries
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/27/2021 8:48:00 AM
My apology, guys, I said this in jest.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/27/2021 8:22:00 AM
Clingy John? Isn't that kind of a disrespectful thing to say to her?
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/27/2021 7:01:00 AM
I have never been clingy, John. This is an edit from something I wrote 5 years ago. Thanks for commenting.

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