Morning's Trapped Whisper

Morning whisper trapped on icicle tips, soon sun rays will release them into winter bird's song ************************************** Category--Nature
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2013 at 8:12 PM
Hi, AGAIN. (waiting and waiting for that new poem!!)
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 12:05 AM
Just saying hi. I still have much to do tonight and I just want to go to sleep. haha. See ya, my friend.
Hunter Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 7:15 AM
Love this kimo!
Gorelick Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 12:25 AM
Oh beautiful! I would have placed this near the top. Always enjoy your work Kash. BG
Jones Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 6:07 PM
Very visual....beautiful
Grisetti Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 12:35 PM
A great example of kimo, congratulations on your win.
Richards Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 8:31 AM
Sheer perfection, Kash! This Kimo is what a Kimo should be, a song within itself! Breathless with beauty!! Glad I didn't miss this one!
Kendrick Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 7:02 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Manassian Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations, Kash! This is such a beautiful Kimo! Glad I took a break from my work in the office to enjoy this scene :) Thanks for the visit!
Veetil Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 2:49 AM
congratulations on your win, Kash....
May Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 5:30 AM
congrats on your win Kash
Roberts Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 7:55 PM
it's just lovely Kash, congrats on your win
A   Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 7:35 PM
Kash.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 4:24 PM
This one was one of my favorites for the contest, Kash. Congrats on the Hm. I just love this one.
Merryman Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 4:10 PM
Kash, congrats on your HM for this lovely Kimo! Love, Kim
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 3:29 PM
Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Chircop Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 8:09 AM
I love this beautiful kimo..It paints magic.I love your poetry..you know it
Gigno Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 7:55 PM
!!!
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 11:26 PM
yes, Kash, that one contest ellips can be monoku. Go read his rules!! I am seeing people doing them like haiku style and many sets of them but I hope I did ok with just that one simple line. I expect to see one from YOU very shortly!
Roberts Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 11:52 AM
Andrea said for me to read and learn from your Kimo. I agree its tremendous....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 10:49 AM
just returning to tell you how good this is. SUre hope to see it at the top.
Horsman Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 8:31 AM
love the visual attributes here Kash
Kendrick Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Very descriptive in a few short lines..Enjoyed viewing the winter stilled scene..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 7:07 PM
I just love it Kash ;) how have you been? No mail for Ma? I miss you! Light & Love
Jones Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 6:54 PM
Very descriptive and beautiful
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