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Morning's Trapped Whisper

Morning whisper trapped on icicle tips, soon sun rays will release them into winter bird's song ************************************** Category--Nature

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/4/2013 8:12:00 PM
Hi, AGAIN. (waiting and waiting for that new poem!!)
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Date: 3/27/2013 12:05:00 AM
Just saying hi. I still have much to do tonight and I just want to go to sleep. haha. See ya, my friend.
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Date: 2/18/2013 7:15:00 AM
Love this kimo!
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Date: 2/18/2013 12:25:00 AM
Oh beautiful! I would have placed this near the top. Always enjoy your work Kash. BG
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Date: 2/17/2013 6:07:00 PM
Very visual....beautiful
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Date: 2/17/2013 12:35:00 PM
A great example of kimo, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/17/2013 8:31:00 AM
Sheer perfection, Kash! This Kimo is what a Kimo should be, a song within itself! Breathless with beauty!! Glad I didn't miss this one!
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Date: 2/17/2013 7:02:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 2/17/2013 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations, Kash! This is such a beautiful Kimo! Glad I took a break from my work in the office to enjoy this scene :) Thanks for the visit!
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Date: 2/17/2013 2:49:00 AM
congratulations on your win, Kash....
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Date: 2/16/2013 5:30:00 AM
congrats on your win Kash
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Date: 2/15/2013 7:55:00 PM
it's just lovely Kash, congrats on your win
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Date: 2/15/2013 7:35:00 PM
Kash.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD
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Date: 2/15/2013 4:24:00 PM
This one was one of my favorites for the contest, Kash. Congrats on the Hm. I just love this one.
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Date: 2/15/2013 4:10:00 PM
Kash, congrats on your HM for this lovely Kimo! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/15/2013 3:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/14/2013 8:09:00 AM
I love this beautiful kimo..It paints magic.I love your poetry..you know it
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Date: 2/12/2013 7:55:00 PM
!!!
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Date: 2/10/2013 11:26:00 PM
yes, Kash, that one contest ellips can be monoku. Go read his rules!! I am seeing people doing them like haiku style and many sets of them but I hope I did ok with just that one simple line. I expect to see one from YOU very shortly!
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Date: 2/9/2013 11:52:00 AM
Andrea said for me to read and learn from your Kimo. I agree its tremendous....Seren
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Date: 2/9/2013 10:49:00 AM
just returning to tell you how good this is. SUre hope to see it at the top.
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Date: 2/9/2013 8:31:00 AM
love the visual attributes here Kash
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Date: 2/9/2013 7:16:00 AM
Very descriptive in a few short lines..Enjoyed viewing the winter stilled scene..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/7/2013 7:07:00 PM
I just love it Kash ;) how have you been? No mail for Ma? I miss you! Light & Love
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Date: 2/7/2013 6:54:00 PM
Very descriptive and beautiful
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