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Morning Whispers Collaboration With Brenda Chiri

Taking in all the beauty of 
this sunny brand new day
As squirrels scurry about,
caught up in their play
Watching brilliant colors 
blend together up in the skies
A soft gentle breeze whispers
Good Morning in silky sweet sighs

amidst the threads
of autumn trees
i listen as the morning speaks
a sigh within its silky breath
rustles through the leaves
within its golden branches
nested squirrels arise in play
beneath horizon's serenade

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Curtis Moorman Date: 9/18/2019 3:54:00 PM Sandra, what a beautiful collaboration -- and it is with one of Soup's most loved poets. I follow Brenda's postings and marvel at her ability to draw the reader into the topic regardless of what she is writing about. I see you have the same ability. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/18/2019 3:57:00 PM Thank you Curtis, what a sweet thing to say...Brenda pens beautifully :) it was a fun write!

Chris Green Date: 9/17/2019 7:03:00 AM What a beautiful collaboration between to of the sites best poets. You both have created an image in your own style which means we, the readers, get double the beauty in one place. Bravo to both of you. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/17/2019 8:51:00 AM What a kind thing to say! Thank you my friend :) hugs

CayCay Jennings Date: 9/16/2019 5:52:00 AM Beautiful - together ya'll excelled in lovely flowing lines that sparkle. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/16/2019 11:29:00 AM Thank you...was a fun little write....:) hugs

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/14/2019 9:24:00 PM Wonderful collaboration, penned by two special poets. Loved how you two worked this one out. Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/15/2019 5:26:00 PM Thank you my friend! :) hugs

John Hamilton Date: 9/14/2019 3:47:00 PM The silky sweet sighs gave it away, just read Brenda's poem so I know she did the first and obviously Sandy the second. Either way it was seamless and beautiful congrats to you both! Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/14/2019 6:40:00 PM Thanks John, sometimes my muse responds to another's poem,or even a comment upon my page... i think i mused something as a reply to one of yours recently...' :) hugs

Judy Ball Date: 9/14/2019 1:24:00 PM A lovely Fall poem . Excellent imagery . God Bless, JB Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/14/2019 6:37:00 PM Thank you so much Judy :) hugs

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/14/2019 11:11:00 AM I enjoyed listening to these morning whispers..they blend so seamlessly, which means the two of you were listening to each other's rhythms. Both talented writers..I can't tell who wrote what. But if I had to guess, at the risk of being wrong---Brenda wrote the first stanza..Sandy wrote the second. Kudos to both. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/14/2019 1:17:00 PM you my friend seem to know our writing styles enough to know who penned what, as you are correct :) Thank you! hugs

Brenda Chiri Date: 9/14/2019 8:43:00 AM Yea I love it! Two poets describing the same thing in their own way! Perfect! Thank you Sandy it was eye opening yet such fun!;) love your style!:) Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/16/2019 11:31:00 AM both sets are equally beautiful from two different muses and blend well together :) hugs Brenda Chiri Date: 9/14/2019 8:55:00 AM You did so beautifully! I happen to love your words better than my own!;) Sandra Adams Date: 9/14/2019 8:51:00 AM It was a joy to take your beautifully painted scene and try to paint it as well ... :) hugs