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Morning Whispers

A purely magical morning, 
                     Pittter-patter, Pitter-patter, the rain whispers. 
                                  The Rose bush sways.
                      The wind rustles through the Willow leaves,
                                 murmurs doting words!

                        The cloud floats - fragrant petals of Jasmine,
                               swish me to a serene childhood, 
                           Picking Seuli flowers from the ground! 

                                            Drip-drop, drip-drop,
                             The dripping sound resonates memories 
                                         of swing and laughter,  
                                         of flowers and chatter, 
                                        Raindrops hold them all. 
 
                           You whisper to me in your soft velvety voice, 
                                          reminisce our moments 
                                                   of endless joy. 
                                                  I am breathless! 

                       Your dreamy voice takes me to a mesmerizing wonderland 
                               where  a river hums a lullaby unforgettable! 

For "Whisper" Premier Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Regina Riddle

Copyright © Malabika Ray Choudhury | Year Posted 2020

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Jay Narain Date: 4/21/2023 9:46:00 AM BEAUTIFUL POEM Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 4/21/2023 11:28:00 AM Thank you for reading. Appreciate your kind comment.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/8/2020 7:37:00 AM Hello Mala, the rain whispers its secrets to the wind. raindrops are soothing sounds to me. like the waves coming to shore with the wind blowing. Relaxing. Enjoy your day my friend. love. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/9/2020 1:38:00 PM Hello Mala,you are so welcome. Did you get flooded? If so how bad was it? It was a down pour here lasted a short wile. Then stopped raining,then poured with the sunshine. A rainbow came out. Enjoy your day my friend. love. Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/9/2020 8:00:00 AM Hi Darlene, thank you for such a poetic comment - it's lovely! Really appreciate, dear friend!

Aditi Mishra Date: 6/17/2020 3:41:00 AM Back to congratulate you on your win dear Mala for this enchanting piece. Much love :) Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/17/2020 7:04:00 AM Thank you so much, Aditi, for revisiting. You are inspiring me with your kind and encouraging words. I am really honoured and glad to be on the list with such talented poets. Love, Mala

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/16/2020 6:37:00 PM I am so happy to see this wonderful poem on the winners list Mala. I feel honored to be on this list with you. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/16/2020 8:04:00 PM Thank you so much, dear friend. I am equally thrilled to see my name on the list with you. Your kind words mean a lot in my journey. Love, Mala

JCB Brul Date: 6/16/2020 6:23:00 PM Back to congratulate you my dear friend...This time whispering, " I'm so proud of you!" Keep the inspiration glowing! Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/16/2020 8:05:00 PM You are always inspiring me with your kind and encouraging words. I am proud of you, too! Thank you so much. Love, Mala.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 6/16/2020 5:51:00 PM Wonderful words, my friend. Thank you for entering and congrats on your win. God bless you with love, Gina Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/16/2020 7:15:00 PM Thank you so much, Gina. I am honoured. This is a learning journey for me in company of brilliant fellow poets. Love, Mala

JCB Brul Date: 6/16/2020 4:52:00 AM These are the kinds of morning whispers I want to wake up with each passing day. Delightful !! Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/16/2020 7:17:00 PM Yes, my friend, I look forward to listening these kind of morning whispers. My day becomes serene and peaceful! Thank you for inspiring me with your lovely encouraging words. Love, Mala

Funom Makama Date: 6/15/2020 3:59:00 PM Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Malabika Ray Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/15/2020 4:57:00 PM Dear Poet, really appreciate your thoughtful comments. Feel fortunate to be in the community of such great poets. I am reading many of your remarkable poems. Best wishes.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/13/2020 3:00:00 PM I love the rain and you have expressed the soothing sounds of the rain so brilliantly. This is sure to be on the list of winners. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/15/2020 4:55:00 PM Dear Connie, many many thanks for your kind and thoughtful comments. So sweet of you! Love, Mala

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 6/12/2020 2:28:00 PM Oh this is so beautiful to read on a quiet afternoon, Mala. I also love to hear the peaceful, pitter patter of a soft, cooling rain. Happy Friday to you...have a blessed weekend, Rhonda xx Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/12/2020 5:36:00 PM Dear Rhonda, your words are so beautiful to me! Delighted to know, like me, you enjoy the pitter patter sound of raindrops! Happy Friday to you too! And also a great weekend. Best wishes Xx

Aditi Mishra Date: 6/12/2020 10:18:00 AM Your words embrace me in a soft blanket of lullabies Mala! This is really soothing :) Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/12/2020 12:03:00 PM Thanks, Aditi. Your words are soothing, thoughtful and inspiring! Best wishes. I am sure you have an amazing one of your own!