Barbara Gorelick Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Morning Walk

Dappled sunlight pathway
The morning softly speaks
Whispering of summer
BlueJay's complaining notes
Long ears in the brown grass
Murmur of working bees

Stride without intent
Savoring quiet
Gathering my strength
Feeding on nature
Hearing life's songfest

Turning away
From daily cares
Breathing  freely
Mind wandering

Memories
Yesterdays
Tomorrows

Air Sweet
Alone

Walk

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Sherese Gooden July 15, 2012 at 10:29 PM Beautiful. Really enjoyed this. Later.

Kash Poet June 24, 2012 at 11:00 AM I am Now thinking whether you entered this excellent Hexaverse in the contest!It is surprising that this was not placed!

Andrea Dietrich June 19, 2012 at 8:08 PM Hey, now this gem could do double time for ya. it could be in the summer contest and the form contest both!! Beautiful!

Gwendolen Song June 17, 2012 at 12:17 PM Magical way of describing the animals and your carefree gait...glad I took this walk with you today, Barbara...refreshing! Oh, hey come over and see the contrasting difference between my diminished hexi from yours...A Toddler's Mealtime Revenge...Let's take this walk again tomorrow...About the same time?...lol. Gwendolen

Kash Poet June 17, 2012 at 1:03 AM The best I have read so far.Should top the chart.Excellent!!!

Poet Destroyer A June 16, 2012 at 6:33 PM Barbara, even alone is sweeter than sweet..always~pd

Russell Sivey June 16, 2012 at 3:15 PM This is a wondrous write Barbara! I rather enjoyed this pleasant and delightful poem! Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen June 16, 2012 at 2:15 PM Peaceful morning walk, lovely poem Barbara. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Justcallme Britt June 16, 2012 at 2:10 PM VERY nice diminished hexaverse! <3