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MORNING TEARS

MORNING TEARS 
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In the morning, dew forms like silk on the garden, marking the start of a new day. It appears by invisible hands, silently and naturally, giving as rain does, even when accompanied by clear cerulean skies. 

silk drops, dawn’s delight
delicate dew-kissed petals
morning's gentle touch

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David Crandall Date: 8/18/2025 6:25:00 PM pretty poem! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/18/2025 12:04:00 PM - A lovely morning kiss, Sara :) - hugs Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/18/2025 6:02:00 PM awww, thank you Anne-Lise! You're the best, hugs, Sara

Joe Dimino Date: 8/18/2025 11:07:00 AM Very lovely, both image and words. Sensitive and comforting. Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/18/2025 6:01:00 PM thanks, Joe. Your most kind. color me grateful! Sara

Sotto Poet Date: 8/18/2025 5:04:00 AM This is a sight of pure beauty. Remarkable craft, bearing a profound truth. Your Haibum, dear Sara, is a marvel to behold. Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/18/2025 6:01:00 PM thank you, Sotto, for your consistent visits and for your encouraging comments. I'm grateful for your insights into my poems...wishing you a splendid evening, Sara

Tom Woody Date: 8/18/2025 5:04:00 AM another often unappreciated gift from a benevolent Creator. Glad you brought it to the fore Sara Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/18/2025 6:00:00 PM thank you Tom. Appreciate your visit and comments today..have blessed evening, Sara

Yann Rolland Date: 8/18/2025 4:57:00 AM delicate and creative, enjoyed the mages too Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/18/2025 6:00:00 PM thank you ever so much, Yann, for your encouraging comments. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/18/2025 4:20:00 AM It appears by invisible hands even with clear skies… delicate dew-kissed petals Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/18/2025 5:59:00 PM thank you for your visit today, Kim, and for your comments. enjoy your evening, Sara