Morning Sun

morning sun shines on

ruffled feathers of a bird

his melodic song

fills the still air and my heart

my smile beams with the sunshine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Macmillan Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 6:40 AM
A smile maker about smiling :D Enjoyed! Thought you'd get a smile, too, from a poem that missed your contest. No rush! You're probably busy judging (judging, never easy!) When you get a moment, please read my Flower Faeries. I wrote it as whimsically as I could. HUGS! Cyndi.... the sun was with us all day yesterday and looks like a repeat show today. It has been such a horrid April here, snow, sleet, wind, ice rain... finally, SPRING!
Macmillan Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 8:53 AM
Thanks, Francine. Still, you know, for me, its about the inspiration, the prompt. Still, much appreciated. :D
Pettit Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 3:14 PM
You have painted a pretty picture with just a few words.
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 8:34 AM
Very descriptive of this spring time..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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April 25, 2013 at 1:40 AM
- Beautiful, Francine! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 12:22 AM
Very sweet, Francine. Shine on with poems like this one.
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