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Written on January 7, 2024

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In the soft morning light, While dew drizzles its sigh Over the petals of a blushing rose, Silencing the reflections of prayers Prayed gently, an intimate flow, Embracing the sweetness of a promise, Love smiling just beyond the horizon, Where the moon is fading And stars, still gazing, hesitate… A breathtaking moment before dawn Has her say, her moment, her chance to portray, All the joy that comes to those Who erase the night with a wonder, Pleasant as the trembling tones of laughter, Stirring hearts to remember, just remember… Sunlight, peaceful and lulling, Quieting even the last hint of a rhapsody Broken into waves of ambiances, Promises, endless praises, Embracing the music, the hushed hopes, Alive as the prayers who kiss away the darkness, Leaving trails of candy cane smiles, Beautiful as the stories we told the child, Who is alive with pleasure that bleeds giggles, Laughing away the last breath of shame, Singing in glistening frostlike mazes, Reverberating ballads, Melodies in the heart, harmonies Grown warm by the fireside of love, The hearth of hope, Fireside so friendly It feels like the sun’s family… Enchanting me – yes, mesmerizing as a dream, Bleeding grace that truly believes, Grace that plants the seed, Sowed into souls who can see… Beneath the Son… This peace will forever be – never a weed, Always, ‘tis agreed… simply believe.

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Date: 1/7/2024 4:09:00 PM
the picture/image was perfect with a heart as the sun rising at dawn. You've beautifully described my favorite time of day and the rising sun. So often I'm out that day and experience the Son and the peace He offers that time of day. Loved this one, hugs, Sara
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Date: 1/7/2024 12:16:00 PM
Embracing the promise of a new dawn and all the blessings that follow, Wonderful write Gina
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Date: 1/7/2024 10:59:00 AM
Enchanting indeed, Gina. Inspirational poetry. And the picture of heart shaped sun is so awesome
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:07:00 AM
Gina my friend, poem is a beautifully crafted ode to the beauty found in moments of transition, love, and the enduring power of belief. It invites the reader to embrace the magic within life's simple joys and to find peace in the belief that grace will always prevail... Loved it..
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Date: 1/7/2024 5:56:00 AM
Your poetry is always filled with the holy spirit. Thanks for sharing this poem and your beautiful gift!
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Date: 1/7/2024 5:40:00 AM
Believe, yea, the key to achieving and reaching a realm of serenity spiritually and beyond. How beautiful is this poem dear gina: is that picture taken of you? I love sunsets more but your poem makes me appreciate sunrise too as every sunrise gives and reminds us that it is an opportunity to do good deeds and rise and make changes for better, i loved this one. And i love your way of painting imagery. So creative and has a mellifluous touch too through out. Sending you light always
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