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Morning Sun - Anacreontic Contest

anacreontic verse early morning sun arising bright red sky welcoming dawn where have you been whilst I slept whose bodies you heated whilst i shivered cold cold night. so blue without you I need you my friends need you yet you leave our side leaving a cold moon to lighten our way. you burn the soil of poor people not kind yet we welcome you bright yellow sun ray can you not choose to stay just a little longer penned 12 January 2016

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Date: 1/28/2016 9:26:00 PM
SEREN, CONGRATS, ON YOUR Anacreontic Verse 2- WIN. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/20/2016 5:05:00 AM
How lovely Seren.. loved reading ur write today.. congrats on big win.
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Date: 1/19/2016 9:15:00 PM
Seren,,, Congratulationson your Anacreontic Verse 2 win. Luv *Skat...
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Date: 1/19/2016 11:25:00 PM
Thank you Skat... Seren
Date: 1/19/2016 5:38:00 PM
I welcome the sight of the sun especially during these dull winter days - congrats on your win Seren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/19/2016 11:19:00 PM
ThanksJan yes the sight of the sun these cold days would be more than welcoming....Seren
Date: 1/19/2016 9:14:00 AM
Fo me this is one of my favorites I have read. Congrats.
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Date: 1/19/2016 1:17:00 PM
So nice of you Richard thank you....Seren
Date: 1/18/2016 11:01:00 PM
Congrats SEREN, thank you for entering :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/19/2016 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Edward for running a great contest....Seren
Date: 1/12/2016 6:28:00 PM
Well done, Seren :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/19/2016 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Laura....Seren

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