Trudy Diane Rider Poet Free verse

Morning Star--Vignette On Music

Spirits float and glide
on the notes of the Native flute
echoing off the canyon walls
resounding through the pine scented forests
cascading over crystal falls
dulcet tones soft as a lovers caress
the melodic winds drift and sigh
as rivers flow through pristine mountains
coaxing the morning star over the horizon.






Vignette on the theme of a piece of music
inspired by: Song for the Morning Star
By: R. Carlos Nakai - Native American Flute Music
from the: Canyon Trilogy CD

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 30, 2010 at 4:38 AM Hi Trudy, I didn't want this week to pass without congratulating you on having your wonderful poem featured this week. It was an delightful to read. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Lovingly, Dane

Ann Rich January 28, 2010 at 7:52 AM Sweet & Smooth. Excellent write and very true in my world...Trudy u have God given vision and u r expressing visions in words and I am soaring in ur words today thank u... AR

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire January 27, 2010 at 6:18 PM Dear Trudy, Congratulations on Your Featured POEM "Morning Star -- Vignette on music" Vivid Imagery becomes Reality in this Marvelous Write ALWAYS YOURS...HG

Laura Mckenzie January 27, 2010 at 3:46 PM Trudy~ Very nice picture you painted Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 27, 2010 at 9:17 AM Congrats on your featured poem of the week on Soup... well deserved choice for a fantastic write... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Jared Pickett January 27, 2010 at 6:19 AM Great imagery within your words... Well worth the feature.....:JP]

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 27, 2010 at 3:14 AM Congratulations Trudy, on having your delightful poem featured this week. It was an utter joy to read. Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane

Daver Austin January 26, 2010 at 8:20 AM Congrats on this selection. Yep! There is a unique charm realized when one listens to the Indian flute. Makes good contemplation food. Love, daver

John Freeman January 25, 2010 at 7:43 PM Exquisite feature Trudy, Congratulations, Sincerely, Moses

Janette Fisher January 25, 2010 at 11:16 AM Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Brian Strand January 25, 2010 at 8:24 AM Congrats on your feature poem this week Trudy Rgds Brian

Doris Culverhouse January 24, 2010 at 4:42 PM I have heard the native american flute music at fairs and it is so beautiful!! Nicely described

January 24, 2010 at 2:51 PM Good use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

James Fraser January 24, 2010 at 1:52 PM Many congratulations in you deserved featured poem this week, Trudy >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown January 24, 2010 at 1:35 PM Congratulations are your well deserved featured poem this week Trudy. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown December 23, 2009 at 10:53 AM Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Trudy. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol

P Sheart December 21, 2009 at 9:46 AM Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

Carolyn Devonshire December 20, 2009 at 2:10 PM Very nice writing, Trudy. Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick December 20, 2009 at 11:32 AM Oh, I love this..the last line is so lovely. This should do well in the second round. Congrats. BG

James Fraser December 20, 2009 at 11:28 AM Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Trudy >> James

Raul Moreno April 29, 2009 at 11:58 AM Congrats on your placement in the contest Trudy, beautiful work...Raul

Carrie Richards April 29, 2009 at 6:45 AM Congratulations Trudy, on this winning poem....I looked up this music...and can see the tranquil attraction, and why you wrote such a lovely poem! Great job, and deserving an honorable mention in Brian's contest! love, Carrie

Brian Strand April 29, 2009 at 12:30 AM Congrats on your success in my Fanfare contest Trudy,my latest contest Pentecost Praise is now open.Rgds Brian

Brian Strand April 25, 2009 at 1:55 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Trudy.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards April 24, 2009 at 5:49 PM This intrigues me....I feel compelled to find the music that inspired this poem and listen. It sounds like something I would dearly love to own. Lovely poem, Trudy. ~ Love, Carrie

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