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Morning Ritual

i wake
my heart racing
with thoughts of you
freshly torn
from my dreams



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on February 5, 2023 for contest 2022 POETRY MARATHON QUALIFIERS' FINAL PLACEMENT POETRY sponsored by Mark Toney - Honorable Mention

and June 20, 2022 for contest 2022 POETRY MARATHON MILE 4 sponsored by MARK TONEY  -  RANKED 3RD
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Ashley Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 6:04 PM
Dear Line, I am deeply touched by the intimate nature and poignant emotion of your perfect, potent, poetic gem. Congratulations for your wonderful final placement in Mark's Marathon contest. I'm honored to share the podium with you. Your artistic brevity is admired! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 8:31 AM
Thank you so much, Susan ~ most appreciated. Have a lovley day ~
Toney Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 1:48 PM
Line, after 267 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, we've reached the finish line of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Congratulations on placing 21st overall in the marathon! Thank you so much for contributing to the success of the contest. There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. The poems of the 28 qualifiers can be accessed from my current "Finish Line" blog post, along with the top 15 placements and their overall stats. Write on!
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 8:32 AM
A wonderful feat indeed. Thank you so much for the journey ~
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 11:36 AM
So glad to see this one a winner in the contest. I always enjoy the short poems packed with meaning. Congrats, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 3:23 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea ~
Goldsmith Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 8:07 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Few words with a story told. Today, be blessed with your win...........
Gauthier Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 8:09 AM
Thanks, Paula. Most appreciated ~
Watt Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 10:39 PM
Powerful in its brevity and humanity. Well done ~ John
Gauthier Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 5:57 AM
Thanks, John ~ hope you have been well
Toney Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 4:39 PM
Line, your short, powerful poem along with its significant title speaks volumes. Congratulations on your podium finish on Mile 4 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 5 has already started!
Gauthier Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 7:17 PM
Thank you so much, Mark. Most appreciated ~
Proxenos Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 1:33 AM
A heart wrenching write, Bless you Line, Jennifer.
Gauthier Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 6:39 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jennifer ~
Buehler Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 2:11 PM
It is nice to wake up this way. Beautiful, Line. :)
Gauthier Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 5:40 PM
Thank you, Evelyn ~
Jones Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 6:09 PM
Another beautiful write. Love this.
Gauthier Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 10:15 PM
Thank you very much, Karen ~
Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 5:25 PM
'torn' nails the feeling and the subsequent mood, Line. Healing and Hope, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 10:16 PM
Thank you, Gershon. Much appreciated ~
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Hdello Lin, yes sometimes we have a very good dream, and we do not want to wake up. I get those dreams to. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 3:12 PM
Hello Lin, Enjoy your evening my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 1:30 PM
good day, Darlene ~ thanks
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