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Morning Rise

Merlin's wand brushes the sky, As the sun rises with a groan. The caw of crows are harbingers Of brightening days tomorrow. Full rightly is the special one Seated upon the Stone of Scone. Prayers bring full circle ancestors, Whose Book of Charms they borrow. In four more days is Christmas Tide. Here Nature waits. The tree alive. These words are shunned By Rome's contrive. This good day gives each a gift To the person by his side. Sealed now with song of return, May Earth, in wealth, be well-supplied. In four more days is Christmas Tide.

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Date: 3/12/2025 3:29:00 PM
simply lovely tribute to this time of year Hilda a beautiful poem hugs Shadow
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/12/2025 8:52:00 AM
A belated thank you for reading. I enjoyed writing this poem of dual celebrations.
Date: 2/1/2025 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Good one.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/1/2025 2:22:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/8/2025 8:03:00 AM
Hi Hilda: This is very uplifting I find and of course dawn is my favorite time of day. I see it was awarded POTD. Belated Congratulations.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/8/2025 8:47:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 12/18/2024 5:44:00 AM
Nice rhyme, Hilda. I also like, The caw of crows are harbringers/Of brightening days tomorrow."
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/18/2024 7:05:00 AM
The big day is coming. Enjoy the winter season
Date: 12/12/2024 8:46:00 PM
I’m sorry I missed your gem! Belated congratulations on potd!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/13/2024 8:18:00 AM
Thank you. You are right on time. Hugs, Hilda.
Date: 12/12/2024 4:01:00 PM
Belated Congratulations Hilda I don't know how I missed this one.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/12/2024 4:12:00 PM
They never get old so we can read poems over and over. Thank you for your congratulations.
Date: 12/12/2024 12:30:00 PM
I like the sound, feeling, and imagery of this poem - great first line!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/12/2024 1:35:00 PM
Thank you. I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed it.
Date: 12/12/2024 11:43:00 AM
Sorry l missed this Hilda…..biggest belated Congratulations on POTD for your beautifully written well deserved poem! Debx
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/12/2024 1:33:00 PM
Thank you. Your comment is an honor.
Date: 12/10/2024 8:28:00 AM
Old Merlin still waves his wand. Maybe he's Santa in disguise.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/10/2024 9:08:00 AM
I think Santa is Norse mythology..
Date: 12/7/2024 3:36:00 PM
Noce one! Belated Congrats Pangie
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/7/2024 5:39:00 PM
Thank you. It's nice to hear from you.
Date: 12/7/2024 6:10:00 AM
Back with congrats on POTD!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/7/2024 6:32:00 AM
Thank you. I appreciate your message.
Date: 12/6/2024 6:07:00 PM
Dear Hilda, your imagery of sunrise, a time of magical transformation and optimism, and the approaching "Christmas Tide" is beautifully expressed. The atmosphere of celebration and renewal brightens not only our tomorrows but our hearts as well. I enjoyed the repetition of the "Christmas Tide" verse, reinforcing the joy of the season. Warmest wishes dear poet friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/6/2024 7:04:00 PM
P.S. my heartfelt congratulations for POTD honors, a very worthy choice! Indeed, the atmosphere of the winter season is captured with finesse:)
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/6/2024 6:34:00 PM
I'm overwhelmed with your kind comments. I enjoyed writing this poem, and hoped it had a winter season atmosphere. Thank you for the encouragement you have given.
Date: 12/6/2024 8:06:00 AM
"May Earth, in wealth, be well-supplied. In four more days is Christmas Tide." -- Beautiful write! Man, celebrate, but be mindful that Earth is also a living-spirit, tender source, taking care that not a blade of grass is needlessly lost. Profound read.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/6/2024 1:13:00 PM
Thank you for your comments. This is a special time of year. Happy Holidays.
Date: 12/6/2024 7:29:00 AM
Hilda sorry I'm late to the party. Congratulations for receiving such a a high Honor of POTD.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/6/2024 12:28:00 PM
Party's never over. Thank you.for your thoughts. I'm happy that this poem is so well received.
Date: 12/6/2024 7:04:00 AM
Dear Hilda! Your artistry is absolutely stunning—congrats on getting POTD! The imagery is so wonderful and perfectly captures the essence of the season. Love it! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/6/2024 7:09:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel. I appreciate your comment. May you have a joyful winter season.
Date: 12/5/2024 11:10:00 PM
Dear hilda, this is so beautiful and so wel written with such descriptive lines that would draw any reader in. I love so many lines in this and what youv conveyed here too is soulfully moving! “ As the sun rises with a groan. The caw of crows are harbingers Of brightening days tomorrow.” i feel and see the warmth of brighter days. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on POTD! Well deserved. Sending you always light
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/6/2024 6:38:00 AM
Thank you. I enjoy hearing from you.
Date: 12/5/2024 10:36:00 PM
Hi Hilda, back to your beautiful poem once more to congratulate you on your POTD.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/6/2024 6:35:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate your return.
Date: 12/5/2024 7:55:00 PM
When we're blessed with another day, it's a precious gift, indeed. Congratulations Hilda, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/5/2024 7:59:00 PM
Thank you for visiting. Enjoy the week.
Date: 12/5/2024 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Hilda, on POTD with this wonderfully crafted poem, celebrating Christmas!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/5/2024 4:22:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment.
Date: 12/5/2024 12:14:00 PM
Congrats on POTD. Very interesting and impressive read!!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/5/2024 12:17:00 PM
Thank you. Writing poems is a joy. I'm glad you liked this one.
Date: 12/5/2024 11:00:00 AM
What a lovely piece for Christmas, Hilda, and congrats on POTD, as well.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/5/2024 11:02:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 12/5/2024 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD, with this beautifully crafted poem
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/5/2024 10:44:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 12/5/2024 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win Hilda. Beautifully written, I enjoyed the read. Wishing you a fabulous time over the Christmas holidays, my friend.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/5/2024 9:51:00 AM
Thank you. May your holiday season bring you joy. Take care.
Date: 12/5/2024 7:32:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Hilda, for this 'smoothie!' :) Gershon
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/5/2024 7:58:00 AM
I did not expect it. Thank you.
Date: 12/5/2024 7:13:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again. Have a great day with your win..............
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/5/2024 7:56:00 AM
Thank you, Paula. You're always welcome here.
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