Morning Rise

Merlin's wand brushes the sky,
As the sun rises with a groan.
The caw of crows are harbingers
Of brightening days tomorrow.
Full rightly is the special one
Seated upon the Stone of Scone.
Prayers bring full circle ancestors, 
Whose Book of Charms they borrow.
     In four more days is Christmas Tide.

             Here Nature waits.
             The tree alive.
             These words are shunned
             By Rome's contrive.

This good day gives each a gift
To the person by his side.
Sealed now with song of return,
May Earth, in wealth, be well-supplied.
      In four more days is Christmas Tide.
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Hamilton Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:29 PM
simply lovely tribute to this time of year Hilda a beautiful poem hugs Shadow
Greenhough Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 8:52 AM
A belated thank you for reading. I enjoyed writing this poem of dual celebrations.
George Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 1:35 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Good one.
Greenhough Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 2:22 PM
Thank you.
Delaney Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 8:03 AM
Hi Hilda: This is very uplifting I find and of course dawn is my favorite time of day. I see it was awarded POTD. Belated Congratulations.
Greenhough Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 8:47 AM
Thank you.
Bayles Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 5:44 AM
Nice rhyme, Hilda. I also like, The caw of crows are harbringers/Of brightening days tomorrow."
Greenhough Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 7:05 AM
The big day is coming. Enjoy the winter season
Jones Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 8:46 PM
I’m sorry I missed your gem! Belated congratulations on potd!
Greenhough Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 8:18 AM
Thank you. You are right on time. Hugs, Hilda.
Tor Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 4:01 PM
Belated Congratulations Hilda I don't know how I missed this one.
Greenhough Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 4:12 PM
They never get old so we can read poems over and over. Thank you for your congratulations.
Crandall Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 12:30 PM
I like the sound, feeling, and imagery of this poem - great first line!
Greenhough Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 1:35 PM
Thank you. I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed it.
M  Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 11:43 AM
Sorry l missed this Hilda…..biggest belated Congratulations on POTD for your beautifully written well deserved poem! Debx
Greenhough Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 1:33 PM
Thank you. Your comment is an honor.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 8:28 AM
Old Merlin still waves his wand. Maybe he's Santa in disguise.
Greenhough Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 9:08 AM
I think Santa is Norse mythology..
Romios Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 3:36 PM
Noce one! Belated Congrats Pangie
Greenhough Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 5:39 PM
Thank you. It's nice to hear from you.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 6:10 AM
Back with congrats on POTD!
Greenhough Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 6:32 AM
Thank you. I appreciate your message.
Ashley Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 6:07 PM
Dear Hilda, your imagery of sunrise, a time of magical transformation and optimism, and the approaching "Christmas Tide" is beautifully expressed. The atmosphere of celebration and renewal brightens not only our tomorrows but our hearts as well. I enjoyed the repetition of the "Christmas Tide" verse, reinforcing the joy of the season. Warmest wishes dear poet friend.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 7:04 PM
P.S. my heartfelt congratulations for POTD honors, a very worthy choice! Indeed, the atmosphere of the winter season is captured with finesse:)
Greenhough Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 6:34 PM
I'm overwhelmed with your kind comments. I enjoyed writing this poem, and hoped it had a winter season atmosphere. Thank you for the encouragement you have given.
DiMino Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 8:06 AM
"May Earth, in wealth, be well-supplied. In four more days is Christmas Tide." -- Beautiful write! Man, celebrate, but be mindful that Earth is also a living-spirit, tender source, taking care that not a blade of grass is needlessly lost. Profound read.
Greenhough Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 1:13 PM
Thank you for your comments. This is a special time of year. Happy Holidays.
Tor Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 7:29 AM
Hilda sorry I'm late to the party. Congratulations for receiving such a a high Honor of POTD.
Greenhough Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 12:28 PM
Party's never over. Thank you.for your thoughts. I'm happy that this poem is so well received.
Rodgers Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 7:04 AM
Dear Hilda! Your artistry is absolutely stunning—congrats on getting POTD! The imagery is so wonderful and perfectly captures the essence of the season. Love it! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Greenhough Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 7:09 AM
Thank you, Daniel. I appreciate your comment. May you have a joyful winter season.
Empress Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 11:10 PM
Dear hilda, this is so beautiful and so wel written with such descriptive lines that would draw any reader in. I love so many lines in this and what youv conveyed here too is soulfully moving! “ As the sun rises with a groan. The caw of crows are harbingers Of brightening days tomorrow.” i feel and see the warmth of brighter days. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on POTD! Well deserved. Sending you always light
Greenhough Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Thank you. I enjoy hearing from you.
George Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 10:36 PM
Hi Hilda, back to your beautiful poem once more to congratulate you on your POTD.
Greenhough Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 6:35 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate your return.
Nicole Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 7:55 PM
When we're blessed with another day, it's a precious gift, indeed. Congratulations Hilda, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Greenhough Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 7:59 PM
Thank you for visiting. Enjoy the week.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 3:22 PM
Congratulations, Dear Hilda, on POTD with this wonderfully crafted poem, celebrating Christmas!
Greenhough Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 4:22 PM
Thank you for the compliment.
Liguori Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 12:14 PM
Congrats on POTD. Very interesting and impressive read!!
Greenhough Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Thank you. Writing poems is a joy. I'm glad you liked this one.
Slaughter Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 11:00 AM
What a lovely piece for Christmas, Hilda, and congrats on POTD, as well.
Greenhough Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 11:02 AM
Thank you.
Poet Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 10:31 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD, with this beautifully crafted poem
Greenhough Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Thank you very much.
Gifford Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win Hilda. Beautifully written, I enjoyed the read. Wishing you a fabulous time over the Christmas holidays, my friend.
Greenhough Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 9:51 AM
Thank you. May your holiday season bring you joy. Take care.
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 7:32 AM
Congrats on POTD, Hilda, for this 'smoothie!' :) Gershon
Greenhough Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 7:58 AM
I did not expect it. Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 7:13 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again. Have a great day with your win..............
Greenhough Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 7:56 AM
Thank you, Paula. You're always welcome here.
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