Morning Rain

The clearest sky follows a warm morning rain
[Experience tells me this again and again]
     Sometimes bringing a brightly colored rainbow
     To remind me of God’s great promise, although
Shadows still drift lazily across the terrain.

I watch the birds shake themselves off and fly
From tree to tree, to and fro, chirping by and by,
     All bringing unending motion beyond and above
          The clearest sky.

Occasional perfect droplets linger on the leaf
Sparkling like well-cut diamonds in bas relief,
     A faint smell of sulphur wafts with the breeze
     Sends a flutter and a ripple through the trees
Portending in this oft-observed Spring motif
          The clearest sky.

FIRST PLACE WINNER
In Brian Strand's Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 2:43 AM
Very descriptive and expressive winner. Congrats. Sara
La France Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 9:46 AM
Milton, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this beautiful write _Constance
Hankins Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 12:01 PM
Thanks so much, Constance, for your note. I seldom write a rondeau, so I was pleased with this effort.
Blodgett Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 10:08 AM
Beautiful depiction of one of my favorite times in nature. Great understanding!
Hankins Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Thank you, Lonna, for your lovely comment.
Logan Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 12:47 AM
Very descriptive and serene. I enjoyed reading your line, LM.
Hankins Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 8:54 AM
Thanks, Jenna. This was my first attempt writing a rondeau. I appreciated your response.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 7:54 PM
This is an endearing poem! It makes me smile! Nicely done,
Hankins Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 8:17 PM
Thanks so much. The smile is nice!
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