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Morning Rain

The clearest sky follows a warm morning rain [Experience tells me this again and again] Sometimes bringing a brightly colored rainbow To remind me of God’s great promise, although Shadows still drift lazily across the terrain. I watch the birds shake themselves off and fly From tree to tree, to and fro, chirping by and by, All bringing unending motion beyond and above The clearest sky. Occasional perfect droplets linger on the leaf Sparkling like well-cut diamonds in bas relief, A faint smell of sulphur wafts with the breeze Sends a flutter and a ripple through the trees Portending in this oft-observed Spring motif The clearest sky. FIRST PLACE WINNER In Brian Strand's Contest

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Date: 2/16/2021 2:43:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive winner. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 2/15/2021 9:46:00 AM
Milton, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this beautiful write _Constance
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/15/2021 12:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, Constance, for your note. I seldom write a rondeau, so I was pleased with this effort.
Date: 1/16/2021 10:08:00 AM
Beautiful depiction of one of my favorite times in nature. Great understanding!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/16/2021 6:50:00 PM
Thank you, Lonna, for your lovely comment.
Date: 1/10/2021 12:47:00 AM
Very descriptive and serene. I enjoyed reading your line, LM.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/10/2021 8:54:00 AM
Thanks, Jenna. This was my first attempt writing a rondeau. I appreciated your response.
Date: 1/9/2021 7:54:00 PM
This is an endearing poem! It makes me smile! Nicely done,
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/9/2021 8:17:00 PM
Thanks so much. The smile is nice!

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