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Morning Prayers

Perched on a fence post, Silhouette...against the sun: The rooster worships.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/21/2010 7:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your # one Raul. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/21/2010 10:13:00 AM
Congrats on winning the contest, well deserved placement. Caryl
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Date: 3/21/2010 8:15:00 AM
Congrats Raul on your first place victory win in the chicken contest.. a great write and win for u to cherish and enjoy...luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/21/2010 3:48:00 AM
Great Haiku, congratulations on your placing first place on this contest, Raul. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/20/2010 10:41:00 PM
Cogratulations on your first win, Raul! I love the imagery and devotion of the rooster, before the sun rises and brings in the new day. A well-deserved win and skillfully written. Enjoy your honor and smile! Kindest Regards, Andrew.
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Date: 3/20/2010 8:35:00 PM
Worshiping the dawn. Waking us all up. Lovely picture you paint here Raul. Well done on your win.....cheers Margaret
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Date: 3/20/2010 10:32:00 AM
I think I never saw this one yet. Congratulations, Raul. WAy to go! andrea
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Date: 3/20/2010 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on first place with this lovely haiku.. I can just see that rooster in the dawn sun.... love Constance
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Date: 3/20/2010 10:23:00 AM
Picturesque! Cleanly written by the BEST! Congratulations, RAY
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Date: 3/20/2010 9:01:00 AM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN WELL DESERVED EXCELLENT WRITE FALESHIA
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Date: 3/20/2010 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your first-place win, Raul! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/20/2010 7:37:00 AM
Hooray for you Raul, !!!!!! Congratulations, and well deserved win dear friend!!! 1st place!!! Perfectly written for Dane Ann's contest!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/20/2010 6:51:00 AM
OMG Raul this was awesome congrats on win well deserved imagery was perfect have to tell you joke later about roosters lol keep up the great work
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Date: 3/20/2010 6:39:00 AM
Nice write!!!.....Congrats on your win....Larry
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Date: 3/20/2010 5:47:00 AM
Nicely put Congrats are in order :^)
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Date: 3/20/2010 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations Raul, What a majestic picture you painted....No wonder it is a winner!!! Best Jeralynn
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Date: 3/20/2010 5:04:00 AM
Hi Raul, Congratulations on your success in my contest. I really like the worshiping idea and the image of the rooster making his morning sounds (Prayers) in the early morning dawn. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 10/14/2009 10:22:00 AM
I recall my childhood days when my old favorite red rooster would flap his way upon the fence, and do his morning offering, or show off, to the hens in the yard. Delightful to watch. A very worthy Haiku. Raul. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 10/6/2009 11:40:00 AM
Kool piece Raul, for in a way they kinda do worship nature in their own way >> James
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Date: 10/6/2009 10:29:00 AM
Awesome image in this Haiku, Raul! The title rocks! This is deffinately a fav! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/6/2009 7:59:00 AM
Great Haiku Raul ! And I believe that is what that Rooster is doing ! Awesome ! Into mine favs ! james
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Date: 10/6/2009 4:01:00 AM
Thank you Raul for sharing this awesome Haiku with us this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:30:00 PM
Reminded me of sunrise at the ranch @.@ jojojo thanks for the experience =D
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:17:00 PM
some people wish they would worship a little more quietly...:-) nice write Raul!
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Date: 10/5/2009 3:00:00 PM
ahhhhhhh yes in doodel do!! GREAT one! Light & Love
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