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Morning Prayers

Perched on a fence post,
Silhouette...against the sun:
The rooster worships.

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John Freeman

Date: 3/21/2010 7:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your # one Raul. Agape, Moses

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/21/2010 10:13:00 AM

Congrats on winning the contest, well deserved placement. Caryl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/21/2010 8:15:00 AM

Congrats Raul on your first place victory win in the chicken contest.. a great write and win for u to cherish and enjoy...luv.. Linda-Marie

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/21/2010 3:48:00 AM

Great Haiku, congratulations on your placing first place on this contest, Raul. (^_^) Noel.

Andrew Crisci

Date: 3/20/2010 10:41:00 PM

Cogratulations on your first win, Raul! I love the imagery and devotion of the rooster, before the sun rises and brings in the new day. A well-deserved win and skillfully written. Enjoy your honor and smile! Kindest Regards, Andrew.

Margaret Foster

Date: 3/20/2010 8:35:00 PM

Worshiping the dawn. Waking us all up. Lovely picture you paint here Raul. Well done on your win.....cheers Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2010 10:32:00 AM

I think I never saw this one yet. Congratulations, Raul. WAy to go! andrea

Constance La France

Date: 3/20/2010 10:29:00 AM

Congratulations on first place with this lovely haiku.. I can just see that rooster in the dawn sun.... love Constance

Ray Dillard

Date: 3/20/2010 10:23:00 AM

Picturesque! Cleanly written by the BEST! Congratulations, RAY

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 3/20/2010 9:01:00 AM

CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN WELL DESERVED EXCELLENT WRITE FALESHIA

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2010 7:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your first-place win, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/20/2010 7:37:00 AM

Hooray for you Raul, !!!!!! Congratulations, and well deserved win dear friend!!! 1st place!!! Perfectly written for Dane Ann's contest!! Love, Carrie

Katherine Stella

Date: 3/20/2010 6:51:00 AM

OMG Raul this was awesome congrats on win well deserved imagery was perfect have to tell you joke later about roosters lol keep up the great work

Larry Belt

Date: 3/20/2010 6:39:00 AM

Nice write!!!.....Congrats on your win....Larry

Mitch White

Date: 3/20/2010 5:47:00 AM

Nicely put Congrats are in order :^)

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 3/20/2010 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations Raul, What a majestic picture you painted....No wonder it is a winner!!! Best Jeralynn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/20/2010 5:04:00 AM

Hi Raul, Congratulations on your success in my contest. I really like the worshiping idea and the image of the rooster making his morning sounds (Prayers) in the early morning dawn. Smiles, Dane Ann

John Freeman

Date: 10/14/2009 10:22:00 AM

I recall my childhood days when my old favorite red rooster would flap his way upon the fence, and do his morning offering, or show off, to the hens in the yard. Delightful to watch. A very worthy Haiku. Raul. Sincerely Moses