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Morning Odes

On wings of sunlight, Enchanting sonnets of peace; Composed by the morn. · Rustled by the leaves, Carried by the footless winds: Echoed by the breeze. · Poems of the dawn, Written by the morning dew: Passionate...fresh odes.

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James Fraser

Date: 9/21/2009 12:17:00 PM

Beautiful Choka Raul, lovely read>>James

Brian Strand

Date: 9/20/2009 11:29:00 PM

Raul thank you for your blog comment,have replaced the link with another.Rgds Brian

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2009 3:32:00 AM

Nicely done. I like first stanza line three and second stanza second line last stanza. I like the way that you brought together the ideas that has been presented in other poems. Keep writing. Sara

Constance La France

Date: 9/19/2009 5:30:00 PM

This is beautiful... I love the line ..carried by footless winds... truly awesome.

Date: 9/19/2009 1:47:00 PM

Wow! Awesome use of imagery for an insightful piece. There is so much depth for the reader to reflect on. Blessings to you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/19/2009 1:39:00 PM

In complete agreement with Ruben...and other soupers!! This is overthetop HOT!! Wonderful in it's expression of gentle beauty, Raul. Excellent writing!! ~ Love, Carrie ....ps...soupmail coming!

Donna Golden

Date: 9/19/2009 12:22:00 PM

P.S. Looks like Ruben is working overtime to get this one on the hotlist! Haha! Well, I've just pitched in, too....you deserve it! D

Donna Golden

Date: 9/19/2009 12:21:00 PM

Loving this piece, Raul! You have mastered so many forms, and manage to infuse your work with romance and tenderness. Wonderful. Donna

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/19/2009 12:08:00 PM

This is so lovely, Raul. I can feel the gentle breeze and the peace it brings. I am about to send you an URGENT soup mail. Thanks for sharing this with us! Love, carolyn

Jared Pickett

Date: 9/18/2009 11:11:00 PM

WOW.... I applaud the both of you!!! First: Raul, I have to agree with Ruben. Of the poems I have read from you, this is top three... ............. ............ ..........Second: Ruben, I have to give you props as well for your comment on his work. Creative and well written Choka Raul......:JP)