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Morning Odes

On wings of sunlight, Enchanting sonnets of peace; Composed by the morn. · Rustled by the leaves, Carried by the footless winds: Echoed by the breeze. · Poems of the dawn, Written by the morning dew: Passionate...fresh odes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/21/2009 12:17:00 PM
Beautiful Choka Raul, lovely read>>James
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Date: 9/20/2009 11:29:00 PM
Raul thank you for your blog comment,have replaced the link with another.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/20/2009 3:32:00 AM
Nicely done. I like first stanza line three and second stanza second line last stanza. I like the way that you brought together the ideas that has been presented in other poems. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/19/2009 5:30:00 PM
This is beautiful... I love the line ..carried by footless winds... truly awesome.
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Date: 9/19/2009 1:47:00 PM
Wow! Awesome use of imagery for an insightful piece. There is so much depth for the reader to reflect on. Blessings to you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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Date: 9/19/2009 1:39:00 PM
In complete agreement with Ruben...and other soupers!! This is overthetop HOT!! Wonderful in it's expression of gentle beauty, Raul. Excellent writing!! ~ Love, Carrie ....ps...soupmail coming!
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Date: 9/19/2009 12:22:00 PM
P.S. Looks like Ruben is working overtime to get this one on the hotlist! Haha! Well, I've just pitched in, too....you deserve it! D
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Date: 9/19/2009 12:21:00 PM
Loving this piece, Raul! You have mastered so many forms, and manage to infuse your work with romance and tenderness. Wonderful. Donna
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Date: 9/19/2009 12:08:00 PM
This is so lovely, Raul. I can feel the gentle breeze and the peace it brings. I am about to send you an URGENT soup mail. Thanks for sharing this with us! Love, carolyn
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Date: 9/18/2009 11:11:00 PM
WOW.... I applaud the both of you!!! First: Raul, I have to agree with Ruben. Of the poems I have read from you, this is top three... ............. ............ ..........Second: Ruben, I have to give you props as well for your comment on his work. Creative and well written Choka Raul......:JP)
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