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Morning Mist

Morning mist Broken perpetually With alarm clock © Harry J Horsman 2011

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Deb Radke

Date: 1/26/2011 7:57:00 PM

Hi Harry. Congratulations on your winning placement with this very good haiku. I love the phrasing, and the last line is perfect. Best wishes. Deb

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2011 4:17:00 AM

Congratulations Harry for the win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2011 10:24:00 PM

wow, Harry, I did not see this one yet and I am glad for the winners' circle to see it now. Highest rating for this one! Congratulations!

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/24/2011 5:23:00 PM

wonderful haiku, congrats on your win in the contest

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/24/2011 10:25:00 AM

splendid write,harry... laurels to you for winning big in the contest!! :) hugggs, nette

John Freeman

Date: 1/24/2011 9:43:00 AM

Congratulations Harry on your beautiful Morning Mist, quite a worthy presentation. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2011 9:17:00 AM

Hate the alarm clocks, but love your poem, Harry. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/24/2011 8:52:00 AM

Hi Harry - - Congratulations on your WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/24/2011 8:23:00 AM

I am not surprised to see this clever poem in the winner's circle!! Well done!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/24/2011 6:43:00 AM

Congrats Harry on your super win in the haiku vs. senryu contest ... my friend... awesome win luv..

Carole Cookie Arnold

Date: 1/20/2011 10:43:00 AM

Exquisitely penned Harry The mist of morning slumber is always interrupted by the rattling sounds of our alarming reality. Well Done Love Cookie

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/20/2011 5:09:00 AM

Harry, you have some beautiful Senryu, this one is excellent, I can hear it, that awful noise we hate when thinking of the beauty of the misty morning.....aaah

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/18/2011 7:07:00 PM

good one! Harry! jimbo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/18/2011 5:46:00 PM

The sound of an alarm clock can break any peace we find in the morning, Harry. A wonderful entry for Charles' contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/17/2011 8:05:00 PM

This looks like a presentable haiku.