Robin L. Gass Poet Rhyme

Morning Joy

As the morning softly wakens
to the birds sweet early call
she graces me with beauty
as she lights upon my wall

My gaze draws to my window sill
as sleep falls from my eyes
my blessing is the joy I feel
to see the morning rise

Looking toward the heavens
thankful for this day of days
my joy is turning golden
with the dawns first splendid rays





Thought I'd give you a little sunshine to balance out the dark!  Love Robin

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Susan Palli February 20, 2010 at 7:27 AM Such a beautiful poem. It raised my spirits

John Freeman October 6, 2009 at 4:30 PM Beautiful flowing like a river Rhyme Robin. She arrived with beauty, lights upon your wall, and begins flowing like a river through your thankgiving, as dawns first splendid rays. Awesome poem girl. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Debbie Guzzi September 24, 2009 at 9:38 PM wow...sweet but it's after 12 and I had too much caffine too late and a migraine and I want to go to sleep LOL..Loves ya..go to bed!

Brian Strand September 21, 2009 at 8:38 AM Thank you for your welcome comments today Robin.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards September 20, 2009 at 12:35 PM Uplifting and joyful...thank you for this wonderful poem! ~ Carrie

James Fraser September 20, 2009 at 4:25 AM Beautiful piece Robin, a joy to read on this Sunday morning>>James

Brian Strand September 20, 2009 at 12:49 AM Thank you for your welcome comments today Robin Rgds Brian

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire September 19, 2009 at 11:32 AM Dear Robin, Thank-YOU for the sunshine written extreemly well Thank-YOu for Your many Gracious comments I am having computer problems so i use the half hour at the Library LOVE YOU and YOURS ALWAYS...HG

Sue Mason September 19, 2009 at 9:56 AM Sometimes I wake up and even if the sun isn't shining, I feel like you've expressed here!! When you're 66 years old just to wake up is heaven ... LOL ... thanks for being at the Soup, Robin and for all your comments. Sorry I haven't gotten back around to you sooner ... there are tooooooooo many folks here!! ... smile ... Oh, yes did I already get your day/month for my birthday calendar?

John Loving Iii September 17, 2009 at 5:03 PM sweet dawning poem thank you for your comments. jhl

Abe Lopez September 17, 2009 at 12:24 PM the start of the day is my favorite hours of the 24... peaceful write filled with hope!

Sara Kendrick September 17, 2009 at 7:27 AM Just what I need this morning since it is solid cloudy this morning. God gives mountain top experiences but we also get the valleys and the gloom sometimes. Sara

Brian Strand September 16, 2009 at 11:52 PM Robin thanks for your welcome comments today/Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire September 16, 2009 at 1:22 PM Important Soup Mail!

Carolyn Devonshire September 16, 2009 at 8:42 AM Beautiful poem, Robin! So refreshing to read an uplifting piece. Love the way you greet each new day! Nice imagery and perfect form. Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen September 16, 2009 at 5:30 AM Robin, Reading your poetry this morning has been a wonderful way to start the day. Thank you for sharing beautiful words. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Elaine George September 16, 2009 at 12:21 AM Thank you Robin. I needed that. Love, lainie, and thank you for your continued support. it means so much to me. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand September 16, 2009 at 12:17 AM So positive Robin,especially like verse 2.Thanks for your welcome comments today and soupmail.Rgds Brian

James Marshall Goff September 15, 2009 at 5:47 PM thanks! Robin! I enjoyed reading this!...jim

John Freeman September 15, 2009 at 5:14 PM You awoke a beautiful day in me by the way, you say a beautiful day in your rhyme in your beautiful day. I love it. Sincerely, Moses Your comments always welcome and appreciated.

Raul Moreno September 15, 2009 at 4:29 PM You brought joy to my day with this beautiful poem, excellent work...Raul

Debbie Guzzi September 15, 2009 at 4:25 PM smmmmmmmmmoochhhh! 2 more lines and you have a sonnet!!! separate by 4's ..reminds me of zippity doda!

September 15, 2009 at 3:21 PM Enjoyed this uplifting view. Tomorrow is my day off and I hope to have a day like this. Blessings to you for sharing your poem with us. Thank you for the kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing!!!! Karen

Savannah Rose Harper September 15, 2009 at 1:02 PM "as the morning softly wakens" marvelous!

Carol Sunshine Brown September 15, 2009 at 12:18 PM Love your sunshine Robin. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol