Carrie Richards Poet Haiku

Morning In Pastels

Clouds in abstract flight..

         Painted hues of pastel skies..

                            A Monet morning..  





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Inspired by Raul's photograph "Awaiting Dawn"

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John Freeman March 8, 2010 at 7:05 AM Congratulations Carrie. Agape, Moses

Jared Pickett March 3, 2010 at 9:26 AM Wonderful.... Excellent work my friend....:JP]

Connie Marcum Wong February 28, 2010 at 8:07 PM Carrie, I just love your last line in this haiku that adds to the beauty of the other two lines. No wonder it won second place. It is simply enchanting! Congratulations, Connie

James Fraser February 28, 2010 at 4:45 AM Just delightful Carrie >> James

Gerard Keogh Jr. February 23, 2010 at 1:35 PM The winner and still champion. My wife just loved this. A true talent and to receive a compliment is in itself a honor above others. Thank you again. REgards, Gerard.

Caryl Muzzey February 21, 2010 at 5:09 PM Congratulations on your second place win in the contest, a wonderful Haiku. Caryl

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 21, 2010 at 6:42 AM this just made me smile after I read your last line--a Monet morning indeed! Lovely haiku & congrats on your win with this Carrie :)

Brian Strand February 21, 2010 at 1:15 AM Congrats Carrie and thanks for your welcom comments.Rgds Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 20, 2010 at 7:53 PM Congrats Carrie on your second place win in Raul's contest.. a wonderful Haiku to express the photo and a wonderful win.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Margaret Foster February 20, 2010 at 5:09 PM Congratulations Carrie, I am not surprised this is in the winners circle.....Margaret

Andrea Dietrich February 20, 2010 at 3:23 PM congrats to you too, CArrie. YOu did GREAT.

Debbie Guzzi February 20, 2010 at 3:00 PM Just lovely! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown February 20, 2010 at 2:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Raul Moreno's (Awaiting Dawn Contest) Carrie. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno February 20, 2010 at 1:08 PM Carrie, congratulations in placing second in my contest...Raul

Cecil Hickman February 20, 2010 at 12:27 PM delightful and majestic Haiku,,I know now I am in trouble,,,Good luck in the contest,,and Thank you for visiting my words and leaving yours behind,,,Blessings..Cecil

Brian Strand February 20, 2010 at 1:14 AM Indeed indeed Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcom comments today.

Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2010 at 8:59 PM Monet is so nice. YOu should do very well with this one, Carrie. And thanks for the compliment. That is what I do best: forms. I just love them. Andrea

Barbara Gorelick February 19, 2010 at 7:34 PM Well, Im going to have to rethink my piece..this is so much better..I love a Monet morning. BG

Edward Ford February 19, 2010 at 7:32 PM Now that was hot, the visage in ones mind without a visual aid, I didn't see the contest but as I said before that was hot nice job Carrie =)

Constance La France February 19, 2010 at 6:42 PM "painted hues of pastel skies" how enchanting, best of luck in the contest, Constance

Margaret Foster February 19, 2010 at 6:30 PM Oh Yes! this captures the scene perfectly. great Haiku Carrie. thank you for your kindness this morning...Margaret

Sara Kendrick February 19, 2010 at 5:30 PM Would have made a great painting. Should be in the winner's circle. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop February 19, 2010 at 4:54 PM Love the pastel Skies..a beauty.Charma