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Morning from Shadows

A fellow poet says don’t start a poem with looking out the window but I am— I am looking out the window to see the lawn outside my window has grown. A neighbor says there are too many verses on love, but restless I tap laptop keys to compose another. My friend who transferred from where I work to another place— I saw her last week and I’m lost reflections of being with and without love. When I saw her at the front counter I said hello in passing and when I went to check out she was waiting for me. I told her I had to get something from the car and when I came back her boss said that she sent my friend to lunch break. I laughed and said everybody’s got to eat and had to admit I knew my friend from another store. Now I look out the window and a bird trills a song for words unsaid and I look into the light of a brilliant sun.

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Date: 5/13/2024 9:28:00 AM
Mike, this is very sweet and gentle. Sounds to me like the subject individual is mildly attracted to this person or at least you feel some chemistry. If it were I, and I were not in an exclusive relationship, I might try to arrange for a simple date or at least go back and try to strike up a conversation. What's the worst that could happen?
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Date: 5/12/2024 5:19:00 PM
Ahhh the possibilities. And I believe it was the Paulster who wrote: "Some people want to fill the world with silly love songs. What's wrong with that?" Awesome poem
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Date: 5/12/2024 2:16:00 PM
Look out the window, reflect…
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