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day to be

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Morning Dew Brings Echoes of You -JU

A quiet morning with dew
brimming with echoes of you.
Like the sun they glint and skid
through the skin of each eyelid.

Each day is further away
but, I want the ache to stay.
For the throb of loss soothes me,
as our eyes share, day to be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kendrick Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 5:11 PM
Creative winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K
Messina Avatar
March 19, 2026 at 3:35 AM
John, I've now listened to this about a dozen times. So sorry I missed the song when judging... I absolutely love this! Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Keep up the nice work... Charlie
Fowler Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 11:35 AM
Evocative write John. I agree with Andrea! Congratulations! :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 9:38 AM
There should be oodles of comments on this gem. Back with my congrats, John
Anderson Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 10:47 AM
Thanks very much. Cheers.
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2026 at 2:15 PM
Wow. Love this!
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