Morning Breath

Often in the mornings
My woman warm & lusty,
Approaches me amorously
With eyes still glued & crusty.

To offer not a breakfast, 
Not a coffee but a flood of feverish caresses,
She says will do me good.

But if it's far too early,
I just don't want to know 
My angel's lewd manoeuveres,
On a bouncy bed and so.

Laying still & farting
Or simply feighning death,
Are the only sure solutions
To my sweetheart's morning breath!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 2:20 PM
thank you for the reply below...Linda
Ika Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 5:12 PM
Hi welcome, my fellow 'newbie'. Sorry for the late welcoming-not so warm a welcome huh? The poets here have been friendly so far, hope you're feeling love from them as well.Funny bit about the breath hahaha. Congrats on your poem being featured hey. Would like to add you to my list of creative and poetic friends if you don't mind.xoxo
Kandampullyy Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 6:02 AM
thanks..
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 5:28 AM
Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,
Kandampullyy Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Thank you sir
A  Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 9:31 PM
Hi Sujish, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Kandampullyy Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 1:04 PM
hello Skat how are my friend?
Kandampullyy Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 6:00 AM
Thanks Skat
Andresen Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 1:52 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Sujish :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kandampullyy Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 5:49 AM
Thanks Anne.. :)
A   Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 7:56 PM
Ha, about the morning breath, Sujish, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Kandampullyy Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 5:47 AM
Thanks Linda :)
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