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Got in a bit of bother last night You’re forgiven for thinking my plight Was the result of violence That would make better sense But I was merely arm-wrestling With a tender bar nestling Beside my potato place Where I woke with sour face Brain bruises rid me to bed And blossom in purple and red. 21st May, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/17/2016 6:07:00 PM
Daniel, congrats on your " Last Line Prompt" SKAT
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Date: 6/1/2016 2:20:00 PM
Very nice, Daniel! Congratulations!
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Daniel Davies
Date: 6/1/2016 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Kim! Loved yours as well!
Date: 6/1/2016 11:50:00 AM
Very nice, Daniel. Congratulations on your win in Julia's Premiere Contest. Sandra
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Date: 6/1/2016 5:15:00 PM
Nice of you to say so Sandra!
Date: 6/1/2016 9:24:00 AM
Cute answer to the contest. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Daniel Davies
Date: 6/1/2016 5:14:00 PM
Thanks Joyce!
Date: 6/1/2016 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations Daniel on your win in the "Last Line Prompt - 2" contest! You deserve it :) - Hans
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Daniel Davies
Date: 6/1/2016 5:13:00 PM
Cheers, Hans!
Date: 6/1/2016 4:58:00 AM
Nice poem. Congrats on your win, Daniel. ~karam~
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Daniel Davies
Date: 6/1/2016 5:12:00 PM
Thanks Karam ~ see you in the soup!
Date: 6/1/2016 4:38:00 AM
Great humor, earning you a high win in my contest, Daniel. Well done!
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Daniel Davies
Date: 6/1/2016 5:11:00 PM
Thank you for the opportunity and appreciation of my humble submission.
Date: 5/23/2016 11:06:00 AM
You got hurt arm-wrestling? Hope you're ok! Cute poem!
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Daniel Davies
Date: 5/25/2016 7:09:00 PM
Cheers! You should see the other guy!

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