Morning

Butterscotch morning Sweet with anticipation Awash in dew drops Daffodils nod approval Kiss of promise for today
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Merryman Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 2:09 PM
Your tanka paints such a pretty picture, Barbara. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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April 3, 2012 at 10:23 PM
BARBARA , Congratulations with your beautiful win, in B E Susan's contest.. Have yourself a good night. :-) , luv~PD
Johnson Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 6:32 PM
Congratulations on your win, Barbara. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 10:15 AM
congrats BG on an awesome win for these splendid words of Tanka luv..
Brown Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's contest Barbara. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 9:52 PM
Luscious, Barbara. WOW.
Delacroix Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 7:09 PM
A very nice and sweet morning! Enjoyed your write! Very uplifting! Thanks for sharing, Caroline.
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March 21, 2012 at 6:44 AM
Fresh and inviting! Lovely word selection with a pleasing cadence. Well done, Barbara! Best wishes, Keith
Poet Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 4:11 AM
I think it's a Sedoka.....
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March 21, 2012 at 4:10 AM
A lovely poem here Barbara.The syl count is 5/7/7/5/7/7.I think it's not a Tanka.Pl have a look...regards...kash
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