Morning

Butterscotch morning Sweet with anticipation Awash in dew drops Daffodils nod approval Kiss of promise for today

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Date: 4/4/2012 2:09:00 PM

Your tanka paints such a pretty picture, Barbara. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Date: 4/3/2012 10:23:00 PM

BARBARA , Congratulations with your beautiful win, in B E Susan's contest.. Have yourself a good night. :-) , luv~PD

Date: 4/2/2012 6:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Barbara. Love, Joyce

Date: 4/2/2012 10:15:00 AM

congrats BG on an awesome win for these splendid words of Tanka luv..

Date: 4/2/2012 9:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Date: 3/29/2012 9:52:00 PM

Luscious, Barbara. WOW.

Date: 3/21/2012 7:09:00 PM

A very nice and sweet morning! Enjoyed your write! Very uplifting! Thanks for sharing, Caroline.

Date: 3/21/2012 6:44:00 AM

Fresh and inviting! Lovely word selection with a pleasing cadence. Well done, Barbara! Best wishes, Keith

Date: 3/21/2012 4:11:00 AM

I think it's a Sedoka.....

Date: 3/21/2012 4:10:00 AM

A lovely poem here Barbara.The syl count is 5/7/7/5/7/7.I think it's not a Tanka.Pl have a look...regards...kash