Morning

Morning casts beams of light through the blinds of my room. The birds sing and call from outside. Creation delights the end of the night, but my sleepy bones will not budge. So for now this pillow can shut out the morning. 8.25.18

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Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/11/2018 3:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win, Jesse.

Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/11/2018 8:23:00 PM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2018 5:33:00 PM

I LOVE this!! Now wonder it scored high. Big congrats to you.

Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/11/2018 8:24:00 PM

It finished just behind your excellent poem so I'm pretty happy with that.

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/10/2018 3:08:00 PM

Congrats, Jesse, on your podium win.

Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/11/2018 8:24:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Jesse Rowe

Date: 8/28/2018 2:44:00 PM

I actually am (typically) an early riser. That morning I had just spent the prior day loading all of my in laws (many) possessions into a moving van, and my body was reminding me that I'm not as young as I once was. Thank you for the comment.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/28/2018 7:08:00 AM

Good Morning! Be Early- Riser. Enjoy Morning. I like the line 'Creation delights the end of the night.