Jesse Rowe Poet Rictameter

Morning

Morning
casts beams of light
through the blinds of my room.
The birds sing and call from outside.
Creation delights the end of the night,
but my sleepy bones will not budge.
So for now this pillow
can shut out the
morning.


8.25.18

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Subimal Sinha-Roy September 11, 2018 at 3:09 AM Congratulations on your fine win, Jesse. Jesse Rowe September 11, 2018 at 8:23 PM Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2018 at 5:33 PM I LOVE this!! Now wonder it scored high. Big congrats to you. Jesse Rowe September 11, 2018 at 8:24 PM It finished just behind your excellent poem so I'm pretty happy with that.

Line Gauthier September 10, 2018 at 3:08 PM Congrats, Jesse, on your podium win. Jesse Rowe September 11, 2018 at 8:24 PM Thank you so much.

Jesse Rowe August 28, 2018 at 2:44 PM I actually am (typically) an early riser. That morning I had just spent the prior day loading all of my in laws (many) possessions into a moving van, and my body was reminding me that I'm not as young as I once was. Thank you for the comment.

Anisha Dutta August 28, 2018 at 7:08 AM Good Morning! Be Early- Riser. Enjoy Morning. I like the line 'Creation delights the end of the night.