Beata Agustin Poet Tetractys

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More Than Sand

Awed
grateful
heart of mine
delights with bliss
basking under wondrous freedom pleasure…
	
Contented beyond exuberance wealth…
I thank God’s gifts
numberless
more than
sand*.

Genesis 22:17 That in blessing I will bless thee, ... as the sand which is upon the sea shore...

September 11, 2020
1st place, "Double Tetractys 2" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Eve Roper; judged on 9/17/2020.

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John Castellenas October 3, 2020 at 6:35 AM I do agree. A wonderful poem shared dear Beata.

Linda Alice Fowler September 18, 2020 at 6:32 AM Expressive and lovely read Beata. Congratulations! Linda

Jeanne Mcgee September 18, 2020 at 5:35 AM Congrats Beata.

Carol Mitra September 17, 2020 at 9:59 PM Beautiful poem....and grateful to God indeed for his countless blessings...Congrats on your win Beata.Stay Blessed.

Sam Kauffman September 17, 2020 at 9:21 PM Wonderful echos of Abraham's covenant, Beata. Congratulations on your first place win!

Eve Roper September 17, 2020 at 6:42 PM Lovely write, Beata .. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve..

Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2020 at 1:25 PM great job relating how limitless the grains of those sands are to our gifts from God.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 11, 2020 at 3:46 AM - Lovely written, Beata :) - I chose the same picture :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a nice weekend ... take care :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)