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More Than Nasty-More Like Foolish

I love this nasty game of a combination of leisure and life where the trouble maker becomes the victim and the product of that crafty pencil of our imaginations is translated into a true life story told by the welcomes of roses, gloriosas and saffron crocuses. silk so tight on a flesh so mild can sexualize a nearby stone and with the first half of your luscious castle, the throne definitely stays beneath its delicate walls, strongly preserved for the exotic union of my everlasting presence. The hips’ salvation matches your lips temptation thereby constructing a pix exaggeration to inflict a fixed subordination on me, making it count at six erections already as I’m lost in a mixed contemplation. Oceans gushing out of the sun and trees standing on the clouds are perfections of a world only known by the census of two. Our citizenry well enforced by this mighty affection and bodies well protected by the magnitude of such penetrating jealousy strongly fighting against any threat of liquefying its refined honey and adulterating its rare tasty wine put the art of intimate knowledge into re-evaluation and the strength of the art of sex very close to the question mark of moral bliss. Such wealthy lavishness with all positive alteration to any kind of belonging is evidenced by my accepted foolishness so honourable. Words alone are unworthy because the probability of using all existing letters is not sufficient enough to mold a brick out of a thousand many in building my bridge to your heart.

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Date: 10/13/2015 10:01:00 PM
gosh, this one is so intellectually sexy!! but also seems sad! Great skill with words!
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/30/2015 7:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/13/2015 6:54:00 PM
I am really happy that you have returned dear friend, and your work is even more profound and powerful than ever! You have delivered a masterpiece. A-7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/30/2015 7:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Pandita
Date: 10/13/2015 11:19:00 AM
Hello Funom, Your very powerful words and verse here paint a word picture rife and ripe with exquisite passion and emotion. Your verses: "silk so tight on a flesh so mild / can sexualize a nearby stone," I found to be very interesting indeed. The metaphoric quality of them are very excellent indeed. 7++ Sir!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/30/2015 7:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Gary Bateman
Date: 10/13/2015 10:02:00 AM
You made me smile this morning with your sensual descriptions, subtle, yet clear. One suggestion with the nest to last line "out of many thousand" Well done Funom. ~Jan
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/30/2015 7:46:00 AM
I am glad I did make you smile Jaycee Cervenka... Thank you so much for the beautiful comment
Date: 10/13/2015 8:06:00 AM
Wow this is quite phenomenal! I am impressed!
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/30/2015 7:44:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard

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