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September-5-2025

More than a Soft Toy Poetry Contest

Sponsor. Natasha .L. Scragg


 

 


 

More Than a Soft Toy

I had a lovely little doll got at the tender age of seven.
It was made of fine plastic, with twinkling eyes and golden hair.
At a time when my generation had not heard of Barbie dolls,
My uncle living abroad had gifted it which I held as most dear.

More than anything I treasured it and my friends envied me.
They always rallied around to see and hold it in their hands.
I carried it wherever I went and always slept clutching it.
With its possession, to my parents, I made no more demands.

It looked so pretty in her flitting blue eyes and ponytail.
Dressed in frilled skirt and blouse, she was a beauty and my all.
We were always together day in and out, so inseparable.
But as time skipped, she no more held me in thrall.

I slowly got over my obsession with toys and trinkets.
My bond with the doll grew thinner, I had diverse engagements.
I no more cared for my doll; it lay neglected in some dusty corner.
Seasons rolled and years speeded by, and life took new alignments.

I knew the annual clean-up of my house was long overdue.
Moving the trash, I saw my old doll in a junk box made of plywood.
The very sight brought a surge of sweeping emotions in me
Dusting it, I locked it up in my cabinet, a sweet reminder of my childhood!
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Guptar Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 1:06 PM
Congratulations, Valsa, on your high placement in this contest, with a lovely poem so expressively depicting your feels towards your doll of childhood. Sparks of genuineness stem from the poem. Wish you a sparkling coming new week.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 11:05 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your great "More Than A Soft Toy" write again. What a fun doll picture. Have a fun day with your win as you go writing away..........
La France Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 2:08 PM
Valsa, a lovely poem, I sent you a soupmail today, blessings, Constance
George Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 6:20 AM
Sorry dear Constance. I can't access my soup mail, my inbox, my out box and my contest results. I have been having this problem since a few days. I don't know how l can get help.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 6:39 AM
oh my! your poem brought back memories of my own childhood Barbie that I, too, found in a discarded shoebox in my parents' attic. She's now front and center in what was once my mother's curio cabinet. You captured the essence of growing up using Barbie as a backdrop. Brillian!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 2:32 PM
I enjoyed reading your great "More Than A Soft Toy" write. What a great doll picture. I did not have her, I had a look a like. Childhood toys were the best. "Good Luck" We both did this one.  Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..............
Godwin Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 8:22 AM
Fact or fiction, in beautiful rhyming lines you tell the authentic value a possession may have at some point in your life that, in time, is no longer true often because it's been outgrown. Letting go of something once primary, in no way diminishes the emotions one feels when unexpectedly reunited with it at some point in life because IT WAS a part of your life. Well done and very relatable. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
DiMino Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 4:52 AM
"it lay neglected in some dusty corner. Seasons rolled and years speeded by, and life took new alignments." -- and then, in latter years, we again try to find remembered joy in things that once made happy -- those that have not deserted us entirely for neglect. The wooden box inevitable. Profound write my friend!
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