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......................................Sadly I heard my mother Groan
                                       Look how tall my son has Grown
                                                        
                                        Poor little lamb what have you Heard?
                                        Is the big bad wolf hiding in the Herd?

                                        Now come and see the most amazing Feat
                                         I will walk on my hands instead of my Feet
                                          
                                         At the ball game sitting  on the third Tier
                                         The TWINS LOSE I shed  a  joyful  Tear

                                          Yesterday I had a dream, a dream so Real
                                          Caught a Six pound  trout with a Zebco  Reel

                                        Inspired by a comment on “Hodgepodge POETRY”
                                                         Dedicated To Raul Moreno
                                                      Give it a try my POETIC Friend

Copyright © Hgarvey Daniel Esquire | Year Posted 2009

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Laura Breidenthal Date: 2/15/2012 10:54:00 PM Very witty one; I like your hodgepodges! Login to Reply Laura Breidenthal Date: 2/15/2012 10:55:00 PM always, Laura

Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 5/7/2009 9:36:00 AM Another very creative WRITE/ I'm sure if Raul tries, he'll get it RIGHT. Have a great day. Vince Login to Reply

Robin L. Gass Date: 3/31/2009 7:58:00 AM This is wonderful, HG! Raul is an awesome poet with a giving heart! I love your creative use of Homonyms in this delightful read! Thank you for your thoughtful words! Love, Robin Login to Reply

Date: 3/23/2009 2:51:00 PM HG--The Twins have to win not lose! Hey what's up here. Got a good chuckle out of this. It serves me right for mentioning that I'm a Twins' fan. Keep your sense of humor and keep those poems coming. Thanks for your kind comment on my poem. Karen Login to Reply

Michaela Payne Date: 3/23/2009 1:58:00 PM This is so cool, awesome write thanks for sharing, it's very clever and well written, Blessings ~Michaela~ Login to Reply

Date: 3/23/2009 12:09:00 PM You can change the eighth line to TWIN's for me. I hope they will have another competitive season. Enjoyed your clever use of rhyme. Nice dedication to a wonderful writer and kind person. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good day! Karen Login to Reply

Arany P. Date: 3/23/2009 3:27:00 AM Really cute and clever... ~ Arany Login to Reply

Laurie Ginn Date: 3/23/2009 3:13:00 AM Oh you have been having some fun today. Great job HG Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 3/22/2009 3:50:00 PM Excellent write my friend, the second stanza is my favorite. I will give it a try for fun. Thanks for the dedication...Raul Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 3/22/2009 1:18:00 PM Crazy, wild poetry! I know how you love those Red Sox and I love fishing! Fun to read dear brother! Still haven't found out much about that other site. No one seems to know! Love & hugs, Shar xoxo Login to Reply

Sean Kelly Date: 3/22/2009 11:51:00 AM Well done , HGDE , clever piece . I'm now at peace !!! .... Login to Reply

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 3/22/2009 8:10:00 AM Very clever and impressive rhyming my friend! My favourite couplet HAS to be the fourth... I'm a RABID Red Sox Fan!! Great job!!! Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply