Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Free verse

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......................................Sadly I heard my mother Groan
                                       Look how tall my son has Grown
                                                        
                                        Poor little lamb what have you Heard?
                                        Is the big bad wolf hiding in the Herd?

                                        Now come and see the most amazing Feat
                                         I will walk on my hands instead of my Feet
                                          
                                         At the ball game sitting  on the third Tier
                                         The TWINS LOSE I shed  a  joyful  Tear

                                          Yesterday I had a dream, a dream so Real
                                          Caught a Six pound  trout with a Zebco  Reel

                                        Inspired by a comment on “Hodgepodge POETRY”
                                                         Dedicated To Raul Moreno
                                                      Give it a try my POETIC Friend

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Laura Breidenthal February 15, 2012 at 10:54 PM Very witty one; I like your hodgepodges! Laura Breidenthal February 15, 2012 at 10:55 PM always, Laura

Vince Suzadail Jr. May 7, 2009 at 9:36 AM Another very creative WRITE/ I'm sure if Raul tries, he'll get it RIGHT. Have a great day. Vince

Robin L. Gass March 31, 2009 at 7:58 AM This is wonderful, HG! Raul is an awesome poet with a giving heart! I love your creative use of Homonyms in this delightful read! Thank you for your thoughtful words! Love, Robin

March 23, 2009 at 2:51 PM HG--The Twins have to win not lose! Hey what's up here. Got a good chuckle out of this. It serves me right for mentioning that I'm a Twins' fan. Keep your sense of humor and keep those poems coming. Thanks for your kind comment on my poem. Karen

Michaela Payne March 23, 2009 at 1:58 PM This is so cool, awesome write thanks for sharing, it's very clever and well written, Blessings ~Michaela~

March 23, 2009 at 12:09 PM You can change the eighth line to TWIN's for me. I hope they will have another competitive season. Enjoyed your clever use of rhyme. Nice dedication to a wonderful writer and kind person. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good day! Karen

Arany P. March 23, 2009 at 3:27 AM Really cute and clever... ~ Arany

Laurie Ginn March 23, 2009 at 3:13 AM Oh you have been having some fun today. Great job HG

Raul Moreno March 22, 2009 at 3:50 PM Excellent write my friend, the second stanza is my favorite. I will give it a try for fun. Thanks for the dedication...Raul

Sharon Winter March 22, 2009 at 1:18 PM Crazy, wild poetry! I know how you love those Red Sox and I love fishing! Fun to read dear brother! Still haven't found out much about that other site. No one seems to know! Love & hugs, Shar xoxo

Sean Kelly March 22, 2009 at 11:51 AM Well done , HGDE , clever piece . I'm now at peace !!! ....

Keith Bickerstaffe March 22, 2009 at 8:10 AM Very clever and impressive rhyming my friend! My favourite couplet HAS to be the fourth... I'm a RABID Red Sox Fan!! Great job!!! Best wishes, Keith