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Moral Codes

...to my Mum She was always in the kitchen, kneading pastry with good humour, blending garnishes and gossip as she plied her magic wand and it was dinner time. Struggling with algebra I'd agonize for hours, 'til frustration got the best of me, she tucked me into bed. In the morning she was ready with a fried egg explanation and a hug. Music was her gift to me, along with many others, the sound of her soprano voice still ringing in the air, the wrath of God was nothing to her tantrums at my misbehavior. Sights and smells come bursting through as if it were just yesterday, gentle guidance and strict admonishments, blending like her recipes for cakes and moral codes.

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Date: 11/26/2015 12:38:00 PM
A nice tribute to your mother Keith, Sounds like she had many talents!!! And a bit of discipline never hurt anyone, this poem has pobably made her very proud!!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 11/27/2015 4:34:00 AM
Thanks Kevin! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 11/26/2015 11:49:00 AM
Hell hath no wrath like the wrath of mom, lol yes indeed.
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Date: 11/27/2015 4:34:00 AM
You know it, Randall! Thank you my friend.
Date: 11/26/2015 7:06:00 AM
A tremendous tribute Keith. You mother is a special one.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 11/26/2015 9:34:00 AM
Thanks Tim! much appreciated... Keith
Date: 11/26/2015 12:21:00 AM
I can definitely relate to this piece, Keith- I have fond memories of playing on the kitchen floor whilst Mother towered above, mixing bowl in hand, stirring away and listening to 'Woman's hour' on the radio. And when she shouted my full name (including middle name) I knew I was in DEEP deep trouble... a great write, Keith, much enjoyed. Regards, Viv
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 11/26/2015 9:42:00 AM
Yes my friend... her baking skills and her beautiful soprano voice are my fondest memories. Thank you. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 11/25/2015 9:19:00 PM
Sure reads a lot like my mother to me. She is still hanging on but in very bad health. And we pray to keep her -forever-! "Music was her gift to me, along with many others, the sound of her soprano voice still ringing in the air, the wrath of God was nothing to her tantrums at my misbehavior." ^^^^^ --Solid gold! A7
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 11/25/2015 9:53:00 PM
Thank you Robert... yes, my mum was lead soprano with the church choir, and for a while my dad was tenor, my sister was an alto and little ol' me was a boy soprano. I can stil hear her sweet voice singing even now. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 11/25/2015 7:33:00 PM
brilliant, keith! i especially love the last verse. so good to see you here again...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 11/25/2015 7:56:00 PM
...that was 'here!' My typing is deteriorating! Alzheimer's I guess!! K.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 11/25/2015 7:54:00 PM
It's so good to be hear! I'll be around much more often, and I'm looking forward to reading your poetry! Thank you, and best wishes, Keith :)

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