Get Your Premium Membership

Moraine Spoils

placid ice castle strong swift attacking currents strewn rocky remnant

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/13/2011 9:23:00 PM
stephen, I agree with what DAvid said to you here. The image is great, but stride would be even a better word! Luv, Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 1/5/2011 11:20:00 AM
Here is a tip, my friend, if strewn was stride instead the parallelism would be absolute, but then, you already wrote a beaut.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs