Moraine Spoils

placid ice castle
strong swift attacking currents
strewn rocky remnant
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 9:23 PM
stephen, I agree with what DAvid said to you here. The image is great, but stride would be even a better word! Luv, Andrea
Smalling Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 11:20 AM
Here is a tip, my friend, if strewn was stride instead the parallelism would be absolute, but then, you already wrote a beaut.
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