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Moonstruck Misadventures

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Under a midnight mystic moon a melancholic marionette strums a magical mandolin Its monotone melody humming smothered by a mythical midsummer mist lost in a molten moment of madness he mindlessly meanders giving in to momentum Moonstruck and morose he sets his many mellow memories in motion amazed and mystified and maybe mad he searches for meaning in the matrix of morning AP: 2nd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on February 13, 2022 for contest A STRAND (1073) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on February 3, 2022

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Mike Bayles

Date: 2/12/2022 5:46:00 PM

Very nice story told in a poetic way. The first line totally takes me into the poem.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2022 8:13:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Mike.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/10/2022 4:46:00 AM

Line, I rightly rebelled in reading this write of yours. A deep, delightfully delicious descriptive detailing of a mystical minstrel’s Mussorgsky moment! Line, to summarize my response, More! xox

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2022 5:28:00 AM

Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Sally. Most appreciated and enjoyed ~

Sally Eslinger
Date: 2/10/2022 4:50:00 AM

Line, should read ReVelled, not reBelled. Sorry

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 2/8/2022 11:24:00 PM

Miss Line, You have masterly mentioned mental memos measured out methodically with great meaning! I like this poem!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/9/2022 9:50:00 AM

Thanks, Timothy. Most appreciated ~

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/8/2022 2:01:00 PM

A great piece of alliteration.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/9/2022 9:50:00 AM

Thank you very much, ML ~ most appreciated

Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/8/2022 1:46:00 PM

Hello Line - I very much enjoyed your theme to which no one could argue. Your execution with the alliteration is scene and well done. Thank you for sharing. May this day find you well. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/9/2022 9:50:00 AM

Thank you so much, Lisa. Most appreciated ~

Mike Bayles

Date: 2/6/2022 11:53:00 AM

Great job at alliterating. The rhythm and sound of the poem are great.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/6/2022 12:37:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mike. Much appreciated ~