Line Gauthier Poet Alliteration

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Moonstruck Misadventures

Under a midnight mystic moon
a melancholic marionette
Strums a magical mandolin

Its monotone melody humming
smothered by a mythical midsummer mist
lost in a molten moment of madness
he mindlessly meanders giving in to momentum

Moonstruck and morose
he sets his many mellow memories in motion
amazed and mystified
and maybe mad
he searches for meaning 
in the matrix of morning



AP: 2nd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2025, Honorable Mention 2022

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Mike Bayles February 12, 2022 at 5:46 PM Very nice story told in a poetic way. The first line totally takes me into the poem. Line Gauthier February 12, 2022 at 8:13 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Mike.

Sally Eslinger February 10, 2022 at 4:46 AM Line, I rightly rebelled in reading this write of yours. A deep, delightfully delicious descriptive detailing of a mystical minstrel’s Mussorgsky moment! Line, to summarize my response, More! xox Line Gauthier February 10, 2022 at 5:28 AM Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Sally. Most appreciated and enjoyed ~ Sally Eslinger February 10, 2022 at 4:50 AM Line, should read ReVelled, not reBelled. Sorry

Timothy Mcguire February 8, 2022 at 11:24 PM Miss Line, You have masterly mentioned mental memos measured out methodically with great meaning! I like this poem! Line Gauthier February 9, 2022 at 9:50 AM Thanks, Timothy. Most appreciated ~

M. L. Kiser February 8, 2022 at 2:01 PM A great piece of alliteration. Line Gauthier February 9, 2022 at 9:50 AM Thank you very much, ML ~ most appreciated

Lisa Ricci February 8, 2022 at 1:46 PM Hello Line - I very much enjoyed your theme to which no one could argue. Your execution with the alliteration is scene and well done. Thank you for sharing. May this day find you well. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup. Line Gauthier February 9, 2022 at 9:50 AM Thank you so much, Lisa. Most appreciated ~

Mike Bayles February 6, 2022 at 11:53 AM Great job at alliterating. The rhythm and sound of the poem are great. Line Gauthier February 6, 2022 at 12:37 PM Thank you so much, Mike. Much appreciated ~