James Inman Poet Etheree

Moon's Tears-Lost Innocence

Golden moon's tears rain through shear silken mist,
when shadows grow long in evening breeze,
the flute of the faun through hushed trees
fills the night in baneful tryst.
Arduous sounds of love's
passionate caress
leaving lovers'
stolen kiss
ever
lost.


01/28/16

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Keith Bickerstaffe February 6, 2016 at 3:01 PM You are a poet extraordinaire! Your phrasing and imagery, and the skill with which you have crafted this splendid ETHEREE. Well done indeed!! Regards, Keith A favourite writer for me! James Inman February 7, 2016 at 9:56 AM You leave me breathless, Keith. Three visits on a single evening and such exceptional comments coming from such an exceptional and prolific poet as yourself. Your kindness is overwhelming. A very deep Thank You to you Sir.

Elaine George January 30, 2016 at 9:00 AM Such beautiful visuals in this well done Etheree, James. James Inman January 30, 2016 at 12:38 PM Thank you Elaine.

Anthony Mark January 30, 2016 at 4:01 AM " Moon's tears rain silken, through shear golden mists" James Inman January 31, 2016 at 4:38 PM Thank you for the clarification, Mark. Your point is well taken. Anthony Mark January 31, 2016 at 2:11 AM i personaly think "Golden" is a weak word to start a strong write ? James Inman January 30, 2016 at 8:09 AM Not sure what your intent is here. Do you prefer this word placement or is it a reference to something else?

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2016 at 8:30 PM You never fail to amaze me with your evocative writing, my friend. So lovely!! James Inman January 30, 2016 at 7:50 AM Thank you Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2016 at 9:16 AM - Lovely writing, James !!! - I wish you a wonderful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) James Inman January 29, 2016 at 9:45 AM Thanks Anne Lise, enjoy your weekend as well.

Jan Allison January 28, 2016 at 2:34 PM WOW this is a stunning etheree James such lovely imagery in so few lines:-) hugs Jan xx James Inman January 28, 2016 at 3:01 PM Thanks Jan.

Ovidiu Bocsa January 28, 2016 at 10:05 AM An admirable tear.Let it be of continual joy. Congrat. James Inman January 28, 2016 at 11:48 AM Thank you, Ovidiu.