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Moon's Likeness Of Her Hair

Moon's natural highlights where the sun passes deemed now his ethereal spell In gentle or gleaming colors however fractured each phase moon's natural highlights Tonight his ring around her glistens blue dark where the sun passes And every time as shine's fading, time deemed now his ethereal spell.

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Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 7/4/2024 1:02:00 PM

Hello stranger ;) you had me at Moon! Then I read a line or two, and began to to hum a toon, Inspired by you once again, a favorite to my list that ended far too quick, far too soon! So I circled back around again to read it some-times more on this July 4th afternoon! Love and light always! A.S

Ink Empress

Date: 6/30/2024 2:17:00 PM

“ Tonight his ring around her glistens blue dark” what a metaphor! You have a very unique and artistic way of expressing and i felt this one deeply! So descriptively soulful! And a moon and sun poem is always one that i admire! A fave this is for me

Yann Rolland

Date: 6/28/2024 5:43:00 PM

nice and moving towards sun and moon, two old friends for everyone, enjoyed yann

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/28/2024 12:51:00 AM

There is a great contrast between the sun and the moon. A great poem. Thank you for reading my last poem.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/27/2024 5:43:00 PM

Dear Paige, I adore your depiction of the sun and moon relationship. I especially loved how you depicted the changeable moon with "In gentle or gleaming colors however fractured each phase/moon's natural highlights" - no matter which phase she's in, she's beautiful. A splendid piece. Warmest wishes my poetry friend.. ~Susan

Silent One

Date: 6/27/2024 11:07:00 AM

You described the moon in such a mysterious manner.. nice use of words..

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/26/2024 9:59:00 PM

This is a magical poem of the vintage moon. May it ever shine.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2024 12:46:00 PM

This is a lovely poem, Paige.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/26/2024 8:24:00 AM

Dear Paige, after reading your poem, I get a deep sense of emotions that are filled with wonder and enchantment, the long and transient nature of beauty and time. I think that I really loved the concise language you that seemed to create an eloquence and purity. Ahhh, yes the moonlight and a woman’s hair what better scene is that. – Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 6/26/2024 7:11:00 AM

Very nice read!

Daisy Meadows

Date: 6/26/2024 12:20:00 AM

A lovely poem. Well done.