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Moons Ago, An Hour Or So

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You brushed my cheeks with your soft fingertips and I reached nirvana. I wish you knew; if you only knew your power! With one kiss upon my brow, you vanished... before I could open my eyes moons ago, about an hour or so. It's inexplicable this wicked spell you've cast on me. I can't seem to shake it! You've left me wanting so much more. Was it all a dream or indeed true? I long to hold you close... again. Date written: 10/28/2020

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Len Gasun

Date: 3/14/2022 9:20:00 PM

Beautifully romantic piece. Thanks for sharing my dear friend, Edward. Congratulations on your win! Hugs

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/15/2022 5:20:00 AM

Thank you very much, Len:-)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/14/2022 7:18:00 PM

"I long to hold you close... again" - Beautiful writing. Congratulations!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/15/2022 5:20:00 AM

Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 1/11/2021 10:42:00 PM

The power of love and dreams of its destiny ring so true in your poem. I love it Edward. Lonna

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/12/2021 6:55:00 AM

Thank you very much, Lonna:-) I'm glad you liked my poem!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/29/2020 3:29:00 PM

Hello Edward, oh when you feel love the feeling is strong between two people. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/31/2020 10:30:00 AM

Hello Edward, yes it is true. You are very welcome my friend. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your weekend my friend.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/30/2020 3:13:00 PM

True indeed, Darlene:-) Thank you for the love visit! Enjoy your evening as well, my friend.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/29/2020 11:35:00 AM

You are so right Edward. Love does cast a spell especially as we dream with our eyes open or closed. Harvest blessings! May your dream come true.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/29/2020 1:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sam! Incidentally, this isn't a true write. I'm married, btw:-)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/29/2020 4:43:00 AM

Such a delightful, charming read. It's a venture into feelings that might last and hopefully will. God bless you dear friend

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/29/2020 1:12:00 PM

Thank you very much for the lovely visit, Regina:-) Have a blessed day, my friend.