Moonrise

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At about the same space, eastwards
About eight hours after noon
- yes, it was night - miracle for me
I saw a sun rising ... Exactly as at dawn
A peeking, reddening of sky, creeping up
An amazing moonrise. In my 63rd year
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Anaya Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 5:53 PM
It may be a birthday for you, what mystery. Savana nights, such poetic imagery Anil.
Ricci Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 3:56 AM
Anil Anil Anil. Hello. This is poetic yes once again poetic. Read back your words and thoughts and you will see. (smile) Thank you for sharing beauty and poetry. As always (another smile) Namaste and Shalom. Love and Blessings always. Please remain safe and well.
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February 11, 2023 at 12:26 AM
Aww that sounds delightful Anil!! Lovely poem....Debx
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