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Written: September 10, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ Mounts daydreams in the azure bay. An eerie sway casts halos in the night sky. As a sparkling moonbeam sprayed moon. It is the lyrical refrain of the world, hewn. Drenched in the moonlight odoriferous embrace, The moonlit reverie grabs its place. Whispering chronicles of zeal and desire, In the nebulous shadows, fealty will transpire. The moon, a regent on its celestial throne, Ascends the empyrean heights, shown Its resplendent blaze dabbled in the night, Splashed across the sky with splendor and might. A symphony of ripples waltz upon the bay, As moonshine shimmer casts a cynosure display, Reflecting the existential ephemeral mysteries, A nocturne of dreams, amorous for centuries In this moonlit flash, a queen of midnight. Splashes the globe with her translucent light. Her canvas, speckled with paint, is a delight. Wisdom for forlorn lovers on the starry night. She queries the stars from her throne in the sky, And bequeath stories on distant moon rays. So placid to the grasp, yet sparkling in Gestalt, And limns on the moon's sketch to impart art.

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Date: 9/11/2023 1:47:00 PM
SP, The ladies below have wrapped up your exquisite poem with all the most astounding and befitting words for your lovely poem. I could add nothing they have not said. Best wishes my dear friend. Isn't it wonderful having such talented newcomers to Soup. I know I will learn a lot, or at least have reiterated what you have already taught me.
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Date: 9/11/2023 8:34:00 AM
Oh wow this is absolutely stunning! I am in awe of this write about the moon. I always find moon poems so beautiful to read but yours is beyond any words could praise how you’ve described her as the queen of midnight, with her translucent light, in her throne, her canvas speckled with paint: how descriptive is your imagery , beyond ethereal and captivating: i love as always your rhymes and your wordplay is impeccable! This would take any readers breath away. Truly a masterpiece
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Date: 9/11/2023 4:08:00 AM
"As a sparkling moonbeam sprayed moon" My gosh, what a stunning and outstanding moonlit reverie you've painted here with the glistening hues of your artistic quill. Every line, so gracefully articulated, shines with the magic of poetic brilliance and definitely creates a breathtaking tapestry for the reader to actually grasp and admire "A nocturne of dreams, amorous for centuries" Your wordsmithery and vocabulary.. Everything is just so splendid.. As always, another majestic write..love this!
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Date: 9/11/2023 2:29:00 AM
An enchanting celebration! A tribute of tremendous beauty to the "queen of midnight "! A Majestic setting conceived by your expressive powerful diction and piercing perception! What a symphony of you composed by your rhymes! You just "splash " the world of poetry with your eloquence and artistry to impart wonder! Dear Lasaad, your adept words and forging skill have made of the moon a Gem of rarity of unique charm lovers would aspire to be under its spell! A great poem deserving all recognition and honour! And it is truly my honour and immense joy to be here reading and giving due respect to your amazing poetry.. God bless you. Best regards.
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