Moonlit

Moonlit was the park, its trees not needing lamplight: shadows drifted steadily. Moonlit met my need, so I was in the right place, looking up to all night's stars. Moonlight Delight 9/7/2017 A 3rd place win in Russel Sivey's contest

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/13/2017 10:10:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, my friend - blessings and congrats on your win, Laura! :-) <3

Phil Capitano

Date: 9/10/2017 5:23:00 AM

Back for congrats Laura. Keep up the good work.

Laura Shale
Date: 9/11/2017 1:12:00 AM

Thank you, Phil. :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/9/2017 11:35:00 PM

Congratulation on your win, Laura.

Laura Shale
Date: 9/10/2017 1:33:00 AM

Thanks!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2017 2:02:00 PM

- Congratulations on your beautiful 3rd place, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Shale
Date: 9/10/2017 1:33:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine Smile. :)

John Michaels

Date: 9/9/2017 6:24:00 AM

Very well-penned, Laura. Congrats on your win! Regards, John.

Laura Shale
Date: 9/9/2017 8:10:00 AM

Thank you!

Phil Capitano

Date: 9/7/2017 3:55:00 PM

Very nice work Laura, this is a style I am just working with so its good to see others. Ciao,

Laura Shale
Date: 9/8/2017 12:54:00 AM

Thanks... The 5/7/7 repeat works well for many poetic ideas.