Moonlight Reveries - A Collaboration

My mood is mellow as moonlight gleams
as if she were Orion's treasured orb.
A gilded ornament he's hung on high,
an effulgent light in the vast ebon sky.
I find myself lost in reverie's realm
while Luna glimmers her soft reflection
across these calm cerulean waters,
as gently they ripple over Poseidon's Sea.
Alone in the nuance of this nebulous night,
it's as if I feel his pulse touching me.

"Mighty lord, your sea sways in silken silence
but sovereign, if you could speak to me
what words would you care to share?"

“Why seek my voice when you hear me in ripples,
and if I should whisper through the tide,
my trident would summon storms, not romance.
One breath upon my conch could wake the sleeping deep.
Do not mistake my reflection for my heart,
as Narcissus once mistook water for love.
Even the immortal Gaia knows the ache
of wanting what cannot awaken.
I have left Amphitrite sleeping in her coral halls.
I have watched a fragrant goddess rise naked,
radiantly from a womb of indigo.
Seen Selene spills her silver milk upon my soul,
as her hearts knows what it means to
yearn for he who does not speak.
I am the restless spirit no mortal can tame,
an ancient pulse that controls tempest sighs.
The sea obeys no god timelessly.
It only learns to rise, recede then depart.
Know that infatuation is much like ocean foam,
it forms softly in the embrace of velvet twilight,
then slips between our senses,
disappearing into pelagic sediments.
Do not wander further into my labyrinth,
for, if you dare to surrender to my sovereignty,
I would regret to abandon one as beautiful as you,
in realms where the stars go when they fade."

"I look away from glimmering stars
for their light dimmed in my eyes long ago.
Poseidon, from watery depths you've ascended...
How bold you must think I, a mere mortal
daring to question a god from Olympus.
You speak, not as a suitor but as one in command.
I do not entreat your heart to feel what it does not.
It's not a lover of your realm that I seek.
No, for I would drown at your side 
and wash ashore on the flow of evening tide.
My heart wages war against itself
for I've not the courage to trust in love again.
I refuse to cross the threshold to the past 
where heartache haunts me day and night."

Was great to collaborate with Lin Lane after over a decade.  Thank you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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May Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 11:23 AM
I love the interplay of the mythical deities, Beautiful collaboration
Poet Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 10:06 AM
What a beautifully woven piece! The imagery and emotions are so vivid, it's like being carried away on a gentle tide. Enjoyed reading this for its enchanting storytelling and poetic elegance. Great Collaboration.
Onclaud Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 7:18 AM
the mythical interplay within your lines underscores the glory and pain of godly vulnerability...a standout this one, S !
Onclaud Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 7:17 AM
the mythical interplay within your lines underscores the glory and pain of godly vulnerability...a standout this one, S !
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 1:27 AM
I really liked the portrayal of the goddesses . Those ancient myths are fascinating. You two showed great creativity with this emotive theme
Daniel Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 11:42 PM
Brilliant collab:)
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 1:59 PM
Lovely poetic language in this fine collaboration!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 10:23 AM
How wonderful a collaboration with Lin! It’s a beauty!
Sands Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 5:33 AM
Comgratulations to the both of you for this beautiful collaboration Well done! :)
George Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 10:10 PM
The dialogue between the sea God and the protagonist unravels some unpalatable truths. The sea imagery is so captivating and at the same time frightening. "I am the restless spirit no mortal can tame, an ancient pulse that controls tempest sighs. The sea obeys no god timelessly." The references to Poseidon and other Greek Goddesses take the poem to a classical level. I find this collaboration as a union of two erudite souls who are equally good in the art of poesy! The realization at the end is an eye opener- "My heart wages war against itself for I've not the courage to trust in love again. I refuse to cross the threshold to the past where heartache haunts me day and night."---- Live in the present and never withdraw to the past of aching memories. Beautiful images and a wonderful collaboration👍👏
Buehler Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 4:58 PM
Words seem inadequate to describe the haunting beauty of this poem, and my joy in reading it, Silent One and Lin Lane. The imagery is simply exquisite! This wonderful poem is in my faves.😄✍️🌙🌙
Lane Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 5:16 AM
You're very welcome. We did some give and take, but that's what collaborating is all about. Thanks for the invitation to write with you again.
One Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 5:26 AM
Thanks Lin, there was hardly any give and take compared to some of the other collabs I have done in the past..
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