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Moonlight Music

Rose petal soft lips share a sensuous kiss. Entranced by the sight of the moon rising high While leaves play a susurrate song in choir, A drum shares its tune as my heart plays its part. 1-2-18 MINUANETTA - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden Taken from original poem "Ethereal Bliss - Minuanetta" Arbitrium Divisa 4 Poetry Contest Sponsor Gregory Barden

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Date: 12/19/2019 7:39:00 PM
Beautiful! Congrats!
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Date: 12/18/2019 5:58:00 AM
Thank you so much for your participation in my contest, Connie - congratulations on your win! Please forgive the lengthy wait for results. I hope you and yours have a joyous and bountiful holiday season - blessings, my friend! :o) <3
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Date: 9/21/2019 1:28:00 AM
An awesome romantic verse dear Connie - your few words convey a world of meaning - good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 9/20/2019 2:15:00 PM
This is velvety romance at its best, should do very well!
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Date: 9/17/2019 5:16:00 PM
you picked a part with beautiful imagery, Connie. Love it.
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Date: 9/16/2019 5:50:00 PM
Hi Connie, this is such an excellent little piece, it shines brightly, using such few words. Your creativity shines as you create a loving scene. This reads like a winner to me Connie. All the best in the contest. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 9/16/2019 1:05:00 PM
My dear Connie, this lovely piece is such a beautiful reflection of your romantic heart! Like your entire body of work, it shines brightly with your love for poetry! Bravo. Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 9/16/2019 9:40:00 AM
Beautiful connie!;)
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Date: 9/16/2019 7:09:00 AM
- Incredibly beautiful in four lines, Connie :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2019 7:07:00 AM
Excellent write as always, Connie--loved the blend of romance in moonlight music.
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Date: 9/16/2019 5:53:00 AM
You are such a talented poem when it comes to creating imagery... loved these four lines...
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Date: 9/16/2019 1:30:00 AM
This is wonderful - good choice. Blessings and best wishes for the contest
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Date: 9/15/2019 10:47:00 PM
You chose your extract well. Good luck with the contest. Hugs.
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Date: 9/15/2019 8:12:00 PM
soft romantic verse....beautiful stanza, good luck in the contest my friend :) hugs
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