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Moonlight Falls From the mystical river of moonlight falls cascading her light when the night comes to call and the star studded sky does so daintily dance her magic awaits if you dare take the chance When the white melting moon lights the water so clear the black hearted creatures know darkness and fear it's life giving water can anything cure but death surely waits for a heart less than pure Cool to the touch and refreshingly sweet she taunts in the torment of summer nights heat a most sacred gift sent from heaven above without dark desecration from souls without love To think you can fool her is foolish at best her light is so bright your pretense she'll divest many have tested her waters and tried a thirst without quench was their soul left to die From the mystical river of moonlight falls cascading her light when the night comes to call and the star studded sky does so daintily dance her magic awaits, do you dare take the chance? - Jeannie Minor

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Date: 2/28/2016 6:51:00 AM
Nice reply
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Date: 1/31/2016 9:33:00 PM
I think I will take the chance! Nice quatrain here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 1/31/2016 11:22:00 PM
Thank you, Matthew. I hope you do take the chance, few things in life are more worth it! Thanks for the visit and the comment. Sorry it took so long to reply.
Date: 1/26/2016 9:39:00 PM
Jeannie Minor,, Congrats on your Moonish win. Luv LINDA -
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 1/26/2016 10:48:00 PM
Thanks Linda, I hope "Moonish" is a good thing!
Date: 1/14/2016 4:15:00 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Jeannie!
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 1/16/2016 11:54:00 PM
Thank you, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Very fun to write this one!
Date: 1/13/2016 10:39:00 PM
WOW, Jeannie, Congrats on your win............ Luv ** SKAT**
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Date: 1/16/2016 11:52:00 PM
Hi SKAT, thank you, sorry, I've been away for a few days.
Date: 1/8/2016 9:49:00 PM
I love the play on words for moonlight that falls right into the falls. A very creative piece, Jeannie.
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Date: 1/8/2016 9:53:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 1/6/2016 11:51:00 AM
Jeannie..."Cool to the touch and refreshingly sweet she taunts in the torment of summer nights heat a most sacred gift sent from heaven above without dark desecration from souls without love". My #1 favorite stanza.. This is beautiful, I am grateful I stopped in to read...Be blessed :)-luloo *smiles*
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 1/6/2016 12:23:00 PM
Thank you, Laura. It is definitely a fav for me.
Date: 1/6/2016 9:57:00 AM
this is such a Beautiful write....you set the scene in such a glamorous sight....the river of Love, do you dare to swim....it's always a risk, don't fear it like them....those too afraid to jump in with both feet....for they are the one's who will never be complete....wonderful write Jeannie....;)
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 1/6/2016 12:23:00 PM
Thanks Eric, so glad you liked it.
Date: 1/6/2016 6:48:00 AM
Jeanne, beautiful imagery, I enjoyed the read and you put me in there.. =`)~ Smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 1/6/2016 8:55:00 PM
Hi Olive Eloise, just curious if you had the chance to view the image. If so, love to hear your thoughts.
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Date: 1/6/2016 8:06:00 AM
Thank you, hope you come back to see the image. I was t able to get it to post last night.