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Moonlight and Mist

[First version of ‘My Victorian Astronomer’, which Didn’t qualify for ‘Ghost’ contest. Nonetheless, this remains totally true!
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Moonlight imparted a luminous glow To the surface hugging mist I cast my bait just to the left of the reeds With a nonchalant flick of the wrist A hundred yards on from the silhouette bridge My brolly, my home for the night My hurricane lamp bringing ’squito and midge But gifting me such meagre light I knew there’d be scurryings there in the dark And that I’d see no-one till day Yet there on that boarded off, long disused bridge A man rendered monotone grey A Victorian gent in a cape and top hat His telescope angled to heaven Back in the day not much odd in that But it’s June, nineteen seventy seven I’d only blinked and then he was there Sky watching with me looking on I felt quite a chill at that mid summer scare But I blinked again and he was gone

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Date: 2/12/2021 3:02:00 PM
wow I have goosebumps Terry, a fantastic story:-) hugs Jan xx
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Terry Flood
Date: 2/12/2021 3:43:00 PM
Thanks Jan. I prefer this version as I didn’t need to steer it for the ‘house of the dead’ line. I’ve looked online for River Lea ghosts, (not that I believe your honour) but found nothing. But, as all crackpots say... I know what I saw! Thanks again, Jan. Terry.
Date: 2/12/2021 3:52:00 AM
Love it... a wonderful write. Why didn't it qualify? it looks like it's perfect for that contest? God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 2/12/2021 4:56:00 AM
Thanks Regina. Contest has a requirement for the line ‘from the house of the dead’. Which is why I did the other version. As it turns out, I kinda liked both. Thanks again. Terry

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