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So slowly dancing in Time's chilling solitude bewildering the shadows in Love's diary- desolately She stares as Hope's unwavering beacon Moonlight Delight Contest 09/07/2017

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Date: 3/7/2018 3:58:00 PM
Charlie this is most beautiful. Of course I do favor poems that involve the Moon. But not everyone can capture its beauty the way you have.
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Date: 3/8/2018 1:34:00 PM
Thank you Shadow...
Date: 10/2/2017 8:40:00 PM
Ohh lonely lunar... Just lovely Charlie. Such a beautifully written poem with exquisite imagery and depth. Enjoyed so much! :)
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Date: 10/3/2017 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Susan...
Date: 9/26/2017 4:24:00 PM
I love the awesome imagery, flow and beauty of this piece! Makes me feel like dancing under the mystical light of a full moon - full of hope. Thank you Charlie for a most enjoyable read. Best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 9/26/2017 9:58:00 PM
Thank you Pandita.
Date: 9/19/2017 8:35:00 PM
Oh, I do love this so, Charlie! An outstanding write, my friend
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Date: 9/20/2017 7:21:00 AM
Thank you MR. Wolf...
Date: 9/19/2017 10:56:00 AM
Hello Charlie, I am back. I can see this person dancing in the moonlight. Yes it would be nice to be dancing in the moon light with your sweetheart. I have this dream every night, the figure always changes, I never know whom it is. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/19/2017 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Darlene.
Date: 9/19/2017 8:03:00 AM
Times chilling solitude, love that line, just a wonderful sedoka Charlie!
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Date: 9/19/2017 11:18:00 AM
Thank you John.
Date: 9/15/2017 11:30:00 PM
One can never be lost enveloped with love, the moon and hope. Breathtaking Charlie:) a fave
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Lynn.
Date: 9/13/2017 10:06:00 PM
Beautiful write, Charlie - enjoyed it very much. Blessings and congrats on your win! :-)
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Date: 9/14/2017 6:15:00 AM
Thank you Greg, I value your comments very highly...
Date: 9/12/2017 12:29:00 AM
Very,very beautiful Charlie! Congratulations on a deserving second placement! : )
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Date: 9/12/2017 11:05:00 AM
Thank you Connie.
Date: 9/10/2017 11:38:00 AM
Hope will do that! We all need it and the moonlight!
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Date: 9/11/2017 11:03:00 AM
Yes we do, thank you Kim.
Date: 9/9/2017 4:12:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/10/2017 10:37:00 PM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 9/9/2017 1:59:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful 2nd place, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/10/2017 10:36:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 9/9/2017 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations Charlie :)
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Date: 9/9/2017 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Heidi.
Date: 9/9/2017 6:20:00 AM
Very interesting take on the theme, Charlie... "Time's chilling solitude" is a great line. Congrats on your high-placed win! Regards, John.
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Date: 9/9/2017 10:38:00 AM
Thank you John.
Date: 9/9/2017 6:09:00 AM
Congrats Charlie!
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Date: 9/9/2017 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Vijay.
Date: 9/8/2017 9:06:00 PM
Charlie I think you used a lot of creativity here. I have not read many of the Moonlight sedokas yet but of the few I saw, I think yours is one of the very best. Did you mean "at" in line five?
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Date: 9/8/2017 11:14:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. Luna stares at us as a beacon of hope. That's what I was trying to say. Might have come across a bit awkward, but thanks for your constructive question, I do always value all the help I can get.
Date: 9/8/2017 9:06:00 PM
instead of as.
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Date: 9/8/2017 10:56:00 PM
No.
Date: 9/8/2017 4:48:00 AM
nice Charlie, is a few words you painted such a haunting image for me...
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Date: 9/8/2017 11:23:00 AM
Thank you SO, good to hear from you...
Date: 9/7/2017 9:07:00 PM
Oh, I like your entry the best of all I have read so far Charlie! I bet Russell will give it top honors! : )
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Date: 9/7/2017 11:44:00 PM
You are too kind Connie, thank you...
Date: 9/7/2017 8:26:00 PM
Lovely write ... Flashes of intellect ... Thank you for liking my Hot Summer Day ...
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Date: 9/7/2017 11:43:00 PM
Thank you Probir.
Date: 9/7/2017 5:21:00 PM
Beautiful, Charlie, the imagery is wonderful .. Luck in the contest Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/7/2017 7:36:00 PM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 9/7/2017 4:13:00 PM
with the full moon rising now, this is a warm dedication to its glory.. so fine, charlie.. huggs
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Date: 9/7/2017 7:36:00 PM
Thank you Nette.
Date: 9/7/2017 3:01:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this Charlie. I read it a few times in a row. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/7/2017 7:34:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 9/7/2017 2:09:00 PM
This is beautiful Charlie. The personification of moonlight is what makes it so delightful. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/7/2017 7:34:00 PM
Thank you Janis.
Date: 9/7/2017 2:03:00 PM
Oh just wonderful Charlie....hope to see her tonight
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Date: 9/7/2017 7:32:00 PM
Thank you Tim
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