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Moonlight

The moon light shined against your face and in amazement I could see you for the first time Your hair was black and white from all the wisdom you held within Your skin complexion shimmered Your wings was as bright as the sun that reflexes off of the ocean bed Moonlight shine your grace on me in the blackest of night Show me the way and I shall follow Moonlight you was created by the creator for a purpose to shine your light on me when some say it couldn't be I look upon you with amazement because I can see you with clear eyes for the first time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/27/2015 7:50:00 AM
This lovely, thought-provoking poem sheds new light on the power of the moon's glow to enable us to see ourselves with a new perspective and with clearer vision. Nicely done, April. Hugs and love.
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Date: 8/26/2015 7:45:00 AM
Quite a lovely verse, April... the moonlight is so beautiful to behold, just as this poem is... I remember dearly, going on a moonlight hike at Yosemite National Park... one of the most beautiful moments was looking out at the valley with the moon lighting everything up beautiful.. the contrasts and shadows were glorious.." I look upon you with amazement because I can see you with clear eyes for the first time"....such a great ending to a fantastic poem! Will read some more soon! Always, Laura
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April Walter Skyy
Date: 8/26/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thank you for stopping pass and I look forward to seeing you again!!!
Date: 8/25/2015 9:24:00 PM
i am so amazed by you~
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April Walter Skyy
Date: 8/25/2015 11:14:00 PM
Thank you. I am glad you like my work. I hope to see you again!!!
Date: 8/25/2015 8:32:00 PM
Beautiful.. precious and stunning glimpses of a heaven we can only imagine. Loved this April. Thank you for directing me here ~~x~~
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April Walter Skyy
Date: 8/25/2015 8:45:00 PM
I am glad you decide to stop pass and you enjoyed this poem. I hope to see you again!!!
Date: 8/23/2015 9:30:00 AM
Moon light and dark, white and black, full revolving, sometimes revolutionary, in sight. Thanks for sharing, and visiting over my way.
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April Walter Skyy
Date: 8/23/2015 9:34:00 AM
"Thank you for excepting my invite I hope to see you again... Skyy"
Date: 8/22/2015 12:19:00 PM
April, first, thank you for sharing Moonlight with me, it says that your heart chakra is opened to the universe. When you make that connection, all ill's become a non factor; suddenly, you can see just what you've been missing all along. I visit with my seven chakras everyday, through aroma therapy, and meditation. Moonlight, is a wonderful piece. Always Ken
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April Walter Skyy
Date: 8/22/2015 12:36:00 PM
I am glad you enjoyed it I do alot of meditation and aroma therapy to. Since I started it's like a whole new world opened up for me. I have made a lot of hard decisions and although it hurt I am able to stay focus. Much love goes out to you
Date: 8/12/2015 12:42:00 PM
Beautiful poem on aspirations read from you. i will read many poems day after day surely. Loved always,bl
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Date: 8/12/2015 12:40:00 PM
Nice dear. It's really awesome and I don't have words . all your collection is superb :) .
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Date: 8/12/2015 12:07:00 PM
Another fine poem, Such wonderful and inspired imagery!
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Date: 8/10/2015 8:15:00 PM
Thank you for your comments it helps me to keep striving for success.
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Date: 8/6/2015 11:14:00 AM
Its a great thing to understand wisdom. I enjoyed!
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