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Mooned and Show By Wind

He went to the dance in his kilt. The boy knew he was nicely built. Think of what the girl saw. When the wind blew, Oh law. For all that he had didn't wilt!!!!!

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Robyn Blauw

Date: 2/14/2010 2:14:00 AM

Hahahaha, that is so funny. lol... Good one. You have a good wit.... Hugss

June Ellen Smith

Date: 2/13/2010 10:16:00 PM

Very cute. Nice rhyming and read. Ellen

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/6/2010 5:10:00 PM

ah ha ha. you have a funny way with writing naughty poems.lol ha ha, these images.geez!!>.< [and your comment on my poem, i'll be posting her note, im just not done with it.] veryy humorous poem.ahaa -Always Lynette

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/6/2010 5:11:00 AM

Marty,Im reading the comments below,and rereading your poem and you killed me with laughter indeed:)genuis..Charma

David Byrne

Date: 2/5/2010 8:20:00 PM

He he!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/5/2010 5:36:00 PM

LoL Sue screamed cause the sight that she's seen brought blush to her virginal dreams. With broom in her hand she swatted the man and the kilt fell down fast it seems.

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/5/2010 12:29:00 PM

lol. Thanks for sharing.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/5/2010 4:47:00 AM

Very funny Limerick, Marty! We all know waht a kilt can hide! Liked myself to wear a kilt once back in Scotland...Thanks for commenting Rescue of Dreams...Gert

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/4/2010 5:06:00 PM

funny!!

Sheol Moribund

Date: 2/4/2010 12:41:00 PM

Hey Marty: Very funny and good poem. All I can say is "beam me up Marty", lol. yours truly: Sheol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/3/2010 9:05:00 PM

Thankxxx Marty for your magnificent blog comment on my blog this morning.. he is my "baby" boy so I will surely miss him and all comments are being printed out so he can take them with him so he won't feel too homesick.. and know others around the States are also praying for him.. u are a treasure...thankxxx and luv.. Linda-Marie.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/2/2010 7:13:00 PM

I love limericks. It takes a special skill and this one is great. Thank you for commenting on my poetry. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/2/2010 6:39:00 PM

Thankxxx Marty for your congrats.. u are a sweetheart too... luv.. Linda-Marie... thankxxx also for yahoo.. appreciate...

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 2/2/2010 3:59:00 AM

Good laugh Marty, we need it Daniel

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/1/2010 4:39:00 PM

Oh Marty, are you this naughty??? Would never have known!! Great limerick. Hilarious! Thank you for reading and posting your kind comments on my poem. Peace, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2010 12:46:00 PM

Hahaha. this is exactly what a limerick is suposed to be, funny and naughty at the same time! LUv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2010 8:05:00 AM

Funny .. I can just picture this .. a glorious Limerick indeed and Marty ..your humor is showing so very well... lovely witty write.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 2/1/2010 7:54:00 AM

haha very good limmerick Marty i pride myself on funny writes but this one is a tuff act to follow great write my friend

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/1/2010 4:13:00 AM

WOW, that would NOT be a sight.... That would mess me up if I were to see that.....:JP]

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/31/2010 9:23:00 PM

oh my!!! this had me smiling as well, Marty! hopefully it wasn't a full moon ;)

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/31/2010 9:07:00 PM

LOL! very funny little write! Marty! Thanks for making me smile. You have soup mail. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poems today. Much appreciated. Best wishes, Caroline.