Mooned and Show By Wind

He went to the dance in his kilt.
The boy knew he was nicely built.
Think of what the girl saw.
When the wind blew, Oh law.
For all that he had didn't wilt!!!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Blauw Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 2:14 AM
Hahahaha, that is so funny. lol... Good one. You have a good wit.... Hugss
Smith Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 10:16 PM
Very cute. Nice rhyming and read. Ellen
Chachere Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 5:10 PM
ah ha ha. you have a funny way with writing naughty poems.lol ha ha, these images.geez!!>.< [and your comment on my poem, i'll be posting her note, im just not done with it.] veryy humorous poem.ahaa -Always Lynette
Chircop Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 5:11 AM
Marty,Im reading the comments below,and rereading your poem and you killed me with laughter indeed:)genuis..Charma
Byrne Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 8:20 PM
He he!
Guzzi Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 5:36 PM
LoL Sue screamed cause the sight that she's seen brought blush to her virginal dreams. With broom in her hand she swatted the man and the kilt fell down fast it seems.
Hilliker Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 12:29 PM
lol. Thanks for sharing.
Knop Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 4:47 AM
Very funny Limerick, Marty! We all know waht a kilt can hide! Liked myself to wear a kilt once back in Scotland...Thanks for commenting Rescue of Dreams...Gert
Culverhouse Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 5:06 PM
funny!!
Moribund Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 12:41 PM
Hey Marty: Very funny and good poem. All I can say is "beam me up Marty", lol. yours truly: Sheol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 9:05 PM
Thankxxx Marty for your magnificent blog comment on my blog this morning.. he is my "baby" boy so I will surely miss him and all comments are being printed out so he can take them with him so he won't feel too homesick.. and know others around the States are also praying for him.. u are a treasure...thankxxx and luv.. Linda-Marie.
Johnson Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 7:13 PM
I love limericks. It takes a special skill and this one is great. Thank you for commenting on my poetry. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 6:39 PM
Thankxxx Marty for your congrats.. u are a sweetheart too... luv.. Linda-Marie... thankxxx also for yahoo.. appreciate...
Cheeseman Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 3:59 AM
Good laugh Marty, we need it Daniel
Haick Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 4:39 PM
Oh Marty, are you this naughty??? Would never have known!! Great limerick. Hilarious! Thank you for reading and posting your kind comments on my poem. Peace, Audrey
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 12:46 PM
Hahaha. this is exactly what a limerick is suposed to be, funny and naughty at the same time! LUv, andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 8:05 AM
Funny .. I can just picture this .. a glorious Limerick indeed and Marty ..your humor is showing so very well... lovely witty write.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 7:54 AM
haha very good limmerick Marty i pride myself on funny writes but this one is a tuff act to follow great write my friend
Pickett Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 4:13 AM
WOW, that would NOT be a sight.... That would mess me up if I were to see that.....:JP]
K. Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 9:23 PM
oh my!!! this had me smiling as well, Marty! hopefully it wasn't a full moon ;)
Delacroix Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 9:07 PM
LOL! very funny little write! Marty! Thanks for making me smile. You have soup mail. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poems today. Much appreciated. Best wishes, Caroline.
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