Moonbeam

Obscured, distorted by dense wood and tangled vines Perfectly aimed flash Gentle blue/white beam pierces eye and frigid heart finding a lost soul...

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Skat A

Date: 6/10/2015 12:49:00 AM

Tim, Congratulations, on your win. ThanXs for supporting my MooN contest. GoodNight **SKAT**

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/3/2014 2:18:00 AM

A delight to read the poem. Congrats on the win, Tim

Skat A

Date: 5/1/2014 7:03:00 PM

Tim Congrats & Hugs ------ Love ~SKAT~

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/1/2014 6:43:00 PM

What a fine choka !!! I haven't thought to use this form.....you have inspired me !!

Debra Squyres

Date: 6/7/2013 12:03:00 PM

You packed a lot into these few lines... wonderful write !! Congrats on your win !!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/6/2013 10:24:00 PM

Tim, Congratulations!!! :-) very dreamy --what I was looking for when it comes to night themes. always & forever Linda.... Goodnight

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 7/12/2012 10:35:00 AM

‡ Zombie Love, Tis What We Dream Of, When We Dream Of Love * Numb The Hearts To Feel The Slice * Beautiful, & Thank You For Your Sweet Visit * My Luv, Rachel ‡

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 7/9/2012 10:32:00 PM

Lovely this is...I like this kinda dreamy write, moonlit nights are gorgeous....enjoyed your poem a lot!!!

Kash Poet

Date: 7/9/2012 9:48:00 AM

Love this poignant write Tim...thanks for your kind comment at my pages.