Moonbeam

Obscured, distorted
by dense wood and tangled vines
Perfectly aimed flash
Gentle blue/white beam
pierces eye and frigid heart
finding a lost soul...

naturechoka

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Skat A

June 10, 2015 at 12:49 AM

Tim, Congratulations, on your win. ThanXs for supporting my MooN contest. GoodNight **SKAT**

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 3, 2014 at 2:18 AM

A delight to read the poem. Congrats on the win, Tim

Skat A

May 1, 2014 at 7:03 PM

Tim Congrats & Hugs ------ Love ~SKAT~

Carrie Richards

May 1, 2014 at 6:43 PM

What a fine choka !!! I haven't thought to use this form.....you have inspired me !!

Debra Squyres

June 7, 2013 at 12:03 PM

You packed a lot into these few lines... wonderful write !! Congrats on your win !!

Poet Destroyer A

June 6, 2013 at 10:24 PM

Tim, Congratulations!!! :-) very dreamy --what I was looking for when it comes to night themes. always & forever Linda.... Goodnight

Rachel St.Cross

July 12, 2012 at 10:35 AM

‡ Zombie Love, Tis What We Dream Of, When We Dream Of Love * Numb The Hearts To Feel The Slice * Beautiful, & Thank You For Your Sweet Visit * My Luv, Rachel ‡