Moon Warning

The sky warmly hugs the stars from the weeping moon, as the moon
fearfully watches the world slowly crumbling, warning of impending doom.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Brotherton Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 10:23 AM
I often think of my parents in heaven looking down and seeing how humanity is destroying itself.
Kitchin Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 4:27 PM
Jerry, so true, thanks for your visit.
Rodgers Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 5:30 AM
Dear Tania, Wow, your moon’s lament is hauntingly beautiful, a celestial sentinel witnessing the world’s unraveling. I felt its sorrow draping the night in words of warning, yet within its glow, I sensed a quiet resilience. A stunning piece, stirring both awe and reflection. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Kitchin Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 4:27 PM
Daniel, thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 5:08 AM
Creative lines in this one. I enjoyed reading it. I think nearly every day about the impending events that are going to come upon this earth and the humans that live here. I wonder if it will start today. Soupmail. Sara K
Kitchin Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 3:41 PM
Sara, thank you.
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 3:42 AM
- A frightening time... a cold world, Tania - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 3:41 PM
Anne-Lise, yes it is, thanks for your visit. - hugs
Vaso Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 1:33 AM
Very touching, the world has lost empathy, mostly the western world.
Kitchin Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 3:42 PM
Art, the world is in chaos right now.
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 3:58 PM
I have felt this way for over two decades now. It makes no difference who is in charge. We are doomed.
Kitchin Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 3:42 PM
Andrea, the new administration is causing more issues lately and not making sound choices.
Allison Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 11:27 AM
such worrying times Tania - we should all be worried about what fate the world is under with trump and that Russian geezer and others at the helm:-( hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 11:30 AM
Jan, such crazy times for the US and the world.
Cunningham Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 10:34 AM
Worrying times Tania, Putin is doing what he likes and getting away with it. If the west doesn't do anything he'll carry on. Nobody wants war but sometimes you have to make a stand. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 11:31 AM
Tom, so true, makes me sad and concerned.
Lane Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 9:18 AM
Perhaps not so slowly now that Trump is flexing his mouth muscles in rants, and his finger muscles by signing outlandish decrees. English the official language of the US? WTH have we been speaking??? I just saw a headline where Russia fired missiles, sinking a ship thought to be carrying BRITISH weapons to Ukraine. The vessel is Swiss owned and flying the Panama flag... and Trump accused Zelensky of starting WWIII???
Kitchin Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Lin, nothing would surprise me, it's all such a disgrace. I am for peace and not war. Trump has other agendas.
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