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Moon Warning

The sky warmly hugs the stars from the weeping moon, as the moon fearfully watches the world slowly crumbling, warning of impending doom.

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wayne tolbert

Date: 3/7/2025 2:59:00 AM

Beautifully done in a few words... "the weeping moon" and then "as the moon fearfully watches the world slowly crumbling" Wonderfully done and sadly prophetic. Thanks for this one.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/7/2025 3:08:00 AM

Wayne, thank you.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 3/4/2025 10:23:00 AM

I often think of my parents in heaven looking down and seeing how humanity is destroying itself.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/4/2025 4:27:00 PM

Jerry, so true, thanks for your visit.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/4/2025 5:30:00 AM

Dear Tania, Wow, your moon’s lament is hauntingly beautiful, a celestial sentinel witnessing the world’s unraveling. I felt its sorrow draping the night in words of warning, yet within its glow, I sensed a quiet resilience. A stunning piece, stirring both awe and reflection. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/4/2025 4:27:00 PM

Daniel, thank you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/3/2025 5:08:00 AM

Creative lines in this one. I enjoyed reading it. I think nearly every day about the impending events that are going to come upon this earth and the humans that live here. I wonder if it will start today. Soupmail. Sara K

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/3/2025 3:41:00 PM

Sara, thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2025 3:42:00 AM

- A frightening time... a cold world, Tania - hugs

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/3/2025 3:41:00 PM

Anne-Lise, yes it is, thanks for your visit. - hugs

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/3/2025 1:33:00 AM

Very touching, the world has lost empathy, mostly the western world.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/3/2025 3:42:00 PM

Art, the world is in chaos right now.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2025 3:58:00 PM

I have felt this way for over two decades now. It makes no difference who is in charge. We are doomed.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/3/2025 3:42:00 PM

Andrea, the new administration is causing more issues lately and not making sound choices.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/2/2025 11:27:00 AM

such worrying times Tania - we should all be worried about what fate the world is under with trump and that Russian geezer and others at the helm:-( hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/2/2025 11:30:00 AM

Jan, such crazy times for the US and the world.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/2/2025 10:34:00 AM

Worrying times Tania, Putin is doing what he likes and getting away with it. If the west doesn't do anything he'll carry on. Nobody wants war but sometimes you have to make a stand. Tom

wayne tolbert
Date: 3/7/2025 3:07:00 AM

Absolutely agree Tom. Frightening times. Be well, my friend.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/2/2025 11:31:00 AM

Tom, so true, makes me sad and concerned.

Lin Lane

Date: 3/2/2025 9:18:00 AM

Perhaps not so slowly now that Trump is flexing his mouth muscles in rants, and his finger muscles by signing outlandish decrees. English the official language of the US? WTH have we been speaking??? I just saw a headline where Russia fired missiles, sinking a ship thought to be carrying BRITISH weapons to Ukraine. The vessel is Swiss owned and flying the Panama flag... and Trump accused Zelensky of starting WWIII???

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/2/2025 11:33:00 AM

Lin, nothing would surprise me, it's all such a disgrace. I am for peace and not war. Trump has other agendas.