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Moon Walk on Your Grave

Moon Walk on Your Grave A life begun in stardom, now, ending up in shame. Relentless media, cruel world, who then is there to blame. A sadness inside, no tears on your face. The pain all but over, mass confusion erase. In wonder we watch, can a life be explained? Can't surface your agony, under facade you remained. Let's focus on the talent, musical joy that you gave. In peace now I pray, moon walk on your grave. © Rene' Brady 2009

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Date: 4/5/2016 9:36:00 PM
Rene' Brady, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ---LINDA
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Date: 8/21/2015 9:47:00 AM
Rene, I enjoyed reading your poem today. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/8/2010 9:44:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your powerful pen writing… excellent you! Your friend in poetry Adeleke
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Date: 1/5/2010 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations Rene', You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest. Moon Walk on Your Grave is a beautiful tribute to a magnificent life shared with the world through music. Michael is missed. Very nice poem. 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I come, now, wishing you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010 and for many years to come. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/22/2009 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Rene'. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:57:00 PM
Sensational tribute to Michael Jackson., dear Rene. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie
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Date: 12/21/2009 8:21:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:43:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Rene! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 9:32:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/4/2009 8:36:00 PM
A great write in memory of Michael Jackson. Congrats on your poem being featured this week. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:12:00 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/1/2009 5:29:00 AM
I've just begun sharing my work and this gives me the inspiration to continue. Thank you all for your encouraging comments.
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Rene'. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 12:52:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Rene >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 5:59:00 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 7/29/2009 12:53:00 PM
Brilliant write, great trubute, good to look at the good side, Innocent perception, God bless, Moses WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP
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Date: 7/29/2009 9:31:00 AM
Nice tribute and uplifting conclusion. I wish more people would choose to see the good in others instead of tearing them apart. The rhyme works well. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/29/2009 5:45:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Rene'. Thank you for sharing your poem with us today. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2009 3:00:00 PM
Excellent Rene, a superstar now beside the super stars>>James
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Date: 7/28/2009 1:37:00 PM
Very nicely written Elegy. Sara
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